Membership status: Member
Title: Chapter 27: Happy Family
| 12 May 2016
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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I appeciate how you gave Professor Sinstra a more prominent role. Everyone seems to forget her as a charcter since she's not really one of the core subjects of big 4 heads of house. I have heard that she's the other option for Slytherin head of house.. but usually writers paint her as this mousy women who fits the sterotype cannon expectation of a Hufflepuff. That she is too emotional or week minded in some way. I love how you pained her as some bada hidning in the shadows who knows all secrets because of how she is often a forgotten professor. Man you made her viciously scary when she's angry. Would NOT want to mess with her. Its always the calm collected quiet ones that have the loudest roar. They forget we're here and the smart ones like Sinstra, use that to their advantage. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: lol. My other work actually has her sort of Hufflepuffish and definitely different from this one. But thank you.
The blood quill gives Harry an infection. As he slowly deteriorates, he refuses to go to the Infirmary until a certain Potions Master finds him in a corridor.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Healer Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Etched In Skin
| 13 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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If Snape and Umbridge were to duke it out.. I'd put my money with Snape. Umbridge may be ruthless.. but Snape is a particularly stronger word and he has allies. Most the school may not like Snape, but I'm sure everyone could agree that he's better then Umbridge. Good fanfic, well written.
Title: No one Noticed
| 12 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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I love the story so far, it is very well written. I love the acceptance since 2nd year, and the unexpected frienships.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 13 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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Hmph, that ending though... ;) lol jk, s'long as you write more I will not be angry. As for how long it took for Harry to break and say something I don't think there was a problem with that. As for Nott, thats an interesting development, you said he wouldn't have much air time, but if you reconsidered I think it would make an interesting twist to the story.
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 13 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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Talk about puting it off... but I do like the honorary Slythering bit. I'm curious to see if the Slytherins would even be able to "adopt" Harry into their ranks.. thats a lot of hate for The-Boy-Who-Lived.. Oh, but at least your story is wonderfully written. :)
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Rescuer
| 12 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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Interesting story so far.. dog house... who would've thought there could be something worse then a cupboard.. yikes. I apprciate the map/layout of the house at the end.
After his potion is sabotaged by Draco, Harry is assigned detention, when it all gets too much his glamour drops in Snape's presence revealing his abused, scar-ridden form to the hated professor. But despite Gryffindor beliefs, Snape does have a heart. Can the two find happiness and family? Of course, it's not a smooth ride. De-aged!Harry
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Deaged!Harry, Deaging
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: Released
| 12 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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Hmm I like your story its well written.. but I find myself confused on the age. Harry's acting like a 6 year old when I thought he was 12. And as for his size how small is too small to be considered appropriate 9 year old height.. I'm picturing this gangly kid whos maybe 5 foot and trying to figure how he fits in Snape's lap...
They had it all wrong...wrong enemy...wrong way to win a war...everything was wrong and once again it was all up to Harry as he is forced to go back in time, stuck in his eleven year old body with a fully grown mind...can he get it right this time because there is no second chances this time around...and there is no one to turn to...
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 03 Feb 2015 / 03 Feb 2015
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Here we go again
| 12 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: PenguinGirl94 (Signed)
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Curious as to how this will go, slightly skeptical, but I like to keep an open mind and there haven't been enough chapters for me to fully decide. Certainly has potential, and the writing is well done.
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