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Title: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 16 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I really like your story. It definitely pulls me in and gets me emotionally involved. Just a minor tip. Some of your sentences are really long and that detracts from the flow. Overall it is very good so don’t take my suggestion as a put down of the whole story.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks so much for your review and thank you for the tip! I do have a problem with run-on sentences so I'll have to go back in and tidy those up sometime. I'm glad you liked the fic! :)
Title: Chapter 1: A Shred of Hope
| 01 May 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Just reread this one. I still love it.
"A Christmas Carol" is my favorite novella, movie, play, recording, you name it. My friends have plied me with a multitude of gifts along this theme over the years; the movie book, old copies, new copies, illustrated copies, children's copies, dvds of all the versions (except Cicely Tyson $170 is just too much for a VHS tape). They even found me a coloring book. I even have the song "Ebenezer Scrooge" by Teresa Brewer. It probably shouldn't be a surprise that this plot bunny attacked me in the night when I was vulnerable. Hope that you enjoy my version. Without further ado, but with copious apologies to the late Charles Dickens, my version of A Dursley Christmas Carol.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: Snape is Secretive
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 13 Oct 2019 / 13 Oct 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 14 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Amusing
Author's Response: Thank-you for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 1: A Feather of Hope
| 29 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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An enjoyably sweet, but not too sweet, story
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 29 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Interesting and unique idea. Curious for more...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 01 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Once upon a time a new headmaster dragged a young man in his charge back from the depths of darkness. Now, years later, another boy has turned up to school in poor shape and the Headmaster thinks it’s time for Severus Snape to pay forward what was once done for him, even if said Potions Master goes kicking and screaming all the way. Written for round two of the 2019 Tri-W tournament (even though it’s submitted late). If you like this story don't forget to go vote for it in Site News.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Title: Chapter 2: The Same But Different
| 16 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 3: Two Stories Are One
| 16 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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You have a real gift for dialog. It sounds very natural.
“It’s like playing a game,” Harry said. “A judging game. You sit and listen and at the end of the day you’ll decide whether Severus Snape deserves to die or not.”
His father had spent his whole life trying to protect Harry from the outside world, from himself, at the expense of his own life. Now it was Harry's turn to at least try.
*Fic Submission for the first annual Tri-Writing Tournament. (Round Three)
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Azkaban!Snape, Baby fic, Child fic, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; The Judging Game
| 29 Nov 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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An interesting start. It’s different with James and Severus talking, rather than Lily. I like it even if it’s not festive.
Author's Response: It felt very different with those two talking yes, I agree, it felt even weirder when I was writing it, but in a good way. Thanks for reading! Chapter two will be up shortly.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2; Feather Party
| 13 Dec 2019
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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A different and interesting story
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! New chapter will be up soon!
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