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Every year a professor is tasked with riding the Hogwarts Express from Platform Nine and Three-Quarters, in order to keep an eye on the students, and this year it is Severus Snape's turn.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Sep 2019 / 25 Sep 2019
Series: None - Challenges: Everywhere else is full...
Title: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I really like your story. It definitely pulls me in and gets me emotionally involved. Just a minor tip. Some of your sentences are really long and that detracts from the flow. Overall it is very good so don’t take my suggestion as a put down of the whole story.

    Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your review and thank you for the tip! I do have a problem with run-on sentences so I'll have to go back in and tidy those up sometime. I'm glad you liked the fic! :)

Harry would do anything to not go back to the Dursleys. Even if it meant giving Snape a chance. So, with a shred of hope inside his heart, he approaches Snape with a special letter.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Sep 2019 / 30 Sep 2019
Series: Guardian of Hope - Challenges: Dear Snape, I'm Sorry
Title: Chapter 1: A Shred of Hope 01 May 2021
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Just reread this one. I still love it.

"A Christmas Carol" is my favorite novella, movie, play, recording, you name it. My friends have plied me with a multitude of gifts along this theme over the years; the movie book, old copies, new copies, illustrated copies, children's copies, dvds of all the versions (except Cicely Tyson $170 is just too much for a VHS tape). They even found me a coloring book. I even have the song "Ebenezer Scrooge" by Teresa Brewer.

It probably shouldn't be a surprise that this plot bunny attacked me in the night when I was vulnerable. Hope that you enjoy my version. Without further ado, but with copious apologies to the late Charles Dickens, my version of A Dursley Christmas Carol.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Secretive
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Oct 2019 / 13 Oct 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 14 Oct 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Amusing

    Author's Response: Thank-you for reading and reviewing.  Glad you liked it.

Halloween must’ve had a hit list. ‘Who can we screw with today? Excellent idea, Fate, our old favorite: Harry Potter.’

Not even having a Godfather in Snape could stop the evil from conspiring against him.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two, Parental Snape > Godfather Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Oct 2019 / 28 Oct 2019
Series: Guardian of Hope - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Feather of Hope 29 Oct 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    An enjoyably sweet, but not too sweet, story

One foggy Halloween day, the Dursley family visit a circus. Harry, left to his own devices, goes to a 'Spooky Tent' where, among other exhibits, he sees a cursed photograph. Is it fake? Or is the black-robed man in the photo really a living person, forever trapped in a photo?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Nov 2019 / 28 Oct 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Interesting and unique idea. Curious for more...

    Author's Response: Thank you!

It was happening again and there was nothing he could do to stop it. In the beginning, he’d been in denial. There was no way this could be happening. It was a fluke of circumstance. The fates were out to get him.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Werewolf!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Nov 2019 / 01 Nov 2019
Series: None - Challenges: Harry is a werewolf
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 01 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Interesting start

Once upon a time a new headmaster dragged a young man in his charge back from the depths of darkness. Now, years later, another boy has turned up to school in poor shape and the Headmaster thinks it’s time for Severus Snape to pay forward what was once done for him, even if said Potions Master goes kicking and screaming all the way. Written for round two of the 2019 Tri-W tournament (even though it’s submitted late). If you like this story don't forget to go vote for it in Site News.

Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Nov 2019 / 14 Nov 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: The Same But Different 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I enjoyed this chapter.

Title: Chapter 3: Two Stories Are One 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    You have a real gift for dialog. It sounds very natural.

“It’s like playing a game,” Harry said. “A judging game. You sit and listen and at the end of the day you’ll decide whether Severus Snape deserves to die or not.” His father had spent his whole life trying to protect Harry from the outside world, from himself, at the expense of his own life. Now it was Harry's turn to at least try.


*Fic Submission for the first annual Tri-Writing Tournament. (Round Three)

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Azkaban!Snape, Baby fic, Child fic, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Bullying, Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Jul 2020 / 29 Nov 2019
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; The Judging Game 29 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    An interesting start. It’s different with James and Severus talking, rather than Lily. I like it even if it’s not festive.

    Author's Response: It felt very different with those two talking yes, I agree, it felt even weirder when I was writing it, but in a good way. Thanks for reading! Chapter two will be up shortly.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2; Feather Party 13 Dec 2019
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    A different and interesting story

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! New chapter will be up soon!


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