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Title: Chapter 1: A New World
| 11 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Awwwww - please, please, may I be served a Sequel, mademoiselle? Oh, that clear look of Snape's at Harry, and those ruined shoes - and I adore that you didn't fall for the all -too-common 'blood and gore Durleys'; it is not believable, and their coldheartedness and fear of their own nephew is hard enough; to be ostracized is a terrible fate for any child or adult. More of Snape, the quite reluctant provider. What will win him over? Not only the eyes, ... Best wishes for a happy summer.
Title: Chapter 1: A New World
| 12 Sep 2018
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Please keep writing stories. You have quite a flair, terse, honest, and quietly rich. I look forward to reading more.
With the anniversary of the defeat of Voldemort fast approaching, the Wizarding World is finding it hard to bounce back. It is then that a certain Trio (plus one) find a chance to fix things the first time around far too good an opportunity to pass up. Harry hopes to save those he lost, including a certain Potions Master.
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15
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Completed: No
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Updated: 04 Jul 2021 / 18 Jun 2017
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
| 19 Mar 2019
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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What a lovely new story angle of this pair. Have been reading, forgot to review. Favourited and tracking it eagerly, as a small red, white and black Cavalier King Charles spaniel would.. tail wagging with happiness. Lead on, author.
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 26 Mar 2019
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Oh. Severus ,come on, you really should.. Comfy blanket under him, warm goose feather duvet over him , hot cocoa with cinnamon in two extra large mugs ready at hand and 'Legilimens'... Reveal.. truth. Harry needs Sev's help to cure those dreams, and Snape needs you to feel less alone. Good god, please update yesterday. Hermione could also give tiny feed back about slowing down Charity a bit without cutting her to pieces. Hm, Draco and Hermy ( viz. Caeria's 'Pet Project'-a classic fanfic and Completed. Hurrah!), Ron and Luna?
A chance occurrence gives Snape and Harry a little bit of common ground. Response to Spring Fest #5
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 15 Jul 2017 / 15 Jul 2017
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 16 Jul 2019
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Such a smooth, sentimental and warm story. After laughing at Sev's 'hospital wing ' quote, it made me root around and find the origin. 1943's song: "Comin' In on a Wing and a Prayer" about British pilots,by night, and American,by day. It is sung by 'Spinners' and on You tube. Reminiscent. That song and 'Help' really are good choices foreshadowing Severus' canon life. Happily, we admirers try to give him a better fate. I do like this gem of a story. Thank you so much. Please write more. ...And Jamie Oliver has a mmmm recipe for homemade 'Jammie Dodgers'.. going baking now.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 18 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Absolutely heartwarming and lovely. Pleeze, update others, in order to return full-tilt to this gem, if you want to.. Why is the potions master so shocked at his hug? Have all the teachers treated SS as a persona non grata ever since he was summoned back as a new teacher? - Why? Have none of them a heart or simple friendliness towards a new, proud and shy, thin chap?
When the Dursley home is found to be unsuitable for Harry, Dumbledore implores his Potions Master to take the boy in, for the sake of the promise he made to Lily. Another Snape-adopts-Harry story, set Pre-Hogwarts. Harry is 8. Pairings TBD. Dursley abuse is close to canon.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
| 19 Sep 2020
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Wonderful, intense storytelling. Thank you very much. Enjoyment. I keep returning to this story. And, there are two, two, new chapters on Archiveofourown under the same name and title. Crossreferencing does pay off in these cases of lovely, unfinished tales. Please, dear kind authors: Write fewer, and complete many more, Please?
Title: Chapter 1: Pink!
| 01 Jun 2020
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Enjoyed it hugely! A real laugh from the stomach, so, well done, you. Needed it. Do you know, our Snape, the wonderful irreplacable, unforgettable, loveable Alan Sidney Patrick R; He had a delightful and surprising sense of fun. Did you See Him as Eamon De Valera in undercover as a priest, and a lady of the streets, escaping the church and dodging the British soldiers on his way to Ireland? 'Michael Collins' 1996. I simply lay down and giggled on the floor. Yes, he would wear pink to a party. 'Truly, Madly, Deeply' also has the Puck-ish sense of mayhem. and unsentimentality. Write more, please do ,WorkFromHome calls for fanfiction and Severus. Alan- our true Severus.
Dumbledore has requested Snape retrieve something valuable for the Order and stop Voldemort from getting his hands on it. Unfortunately Snape is also required to take Harry as they need a Parselmouth. Along the way, both learn more about each other and Snape's ideas and assumptions are proven incorrect.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Title: Chapter 12: I May be Dumb, but that's not MY fault
| 02 Aug 2018
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Exciting story- well written, I don't take to constant cliff-hangers, and that cave--- I needed to see starlight in the story,phew. How will they strongarm the Artful Dodger? How will Severus feel as a uncertain father/ protector? will Harry faint with pain, realistically as a wounded human? Will they hitchhike home, or catch a few Icelandic ponies,- which are very strong for their size. they can easily carry even a 6.1"potions Master,- or will they toddle along as Muggles? Will Sev tease Harry? Alan Rickman had a dry, splendid wit. Oh, how his intelligent, courteous warmth is missed in these intolerant, loud times... Please write more soon..when life allows it. Having read, daily, fanfics for 8 years now, I can admit there too many, about eighty percent, gorgeous, talented, brill! stories that stay as unfinished torsos; that horrible habit makes me so sad. Authors and authoresses, please, I beg you, do write the whole story out first in pencil, then start to post one chapter after another. This reader would dance with joy. Haven't you,authors/ readers, ever been sad that something beautiful was just cut off? Thank you for writing this, and I am looking forward to where it will wander. Have a splendid summer.
Set the summer after the Order of the Phoenix. Harry receives a letter which will change his and a certain potions professors life forever. This story features plot twists, betrayal, secrets, memory loss, more memory loss and backstabbing friends. Read to see what happens when Harry finally has the chance for a real family. [Severitus]
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Angry, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Amnesia, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 18
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 13 Jan 2022 / 18 Jan 2018
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Just tell me you didn't know
| 17 Feb 2019
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Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Oh, a steep cliffie- uh, please update soon. Don't let Harry bleed too much over his father's night slippers before healing him. They are very alike in rash-temper, and Sev and Harry could have use of the brill RADA's maxim: "Think, Breathe, Speak." I really like your details of their daily calm, ordered life, and that the impestuous childish, stunted Sirius was able to reflect and write to Severus. Dumbles made me grit molars; he is so unfeeling and blinkered. Looking forward to reading more about them all. Well done.
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