Harry threw a snowball and it hit Snape in the back of the head, which started a chain of events no one thought possible. Entry for round 3 of the first ever Tri-Writing Tournament on P&S. Prompts used: snowball fights and Muggle board games. If you like this story, don’t forget to vote for it! If you don’t like it, vote for someone else's story, just be sure to vote! One-shot.
Takes Place: 5th Year, 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Elves, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Synfidie
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Dec 2019 / 18 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: Snowball Challenge
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Dec 2019 / 18 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: Snowball Challenge
| Title: Chapter 1: The Luckiest Shot | 20 Dec 2019 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- I like it. This was cute. Well-done.
Christmas is supposed to be a time of giving and caring, but nine-year-old Harry Potter knows the Dursleys will do whatever they can to make him miserable. After a terrible day at primary school, he doesn’t expect the evening at Number Four, Privet Drive to be any better, but perhaps it’s not too late for something good to happen.…
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2019 / 21 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2019 / 21 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: A Place for Harry | 05 Jan 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- Well done! Severus seemed realistic and everything meshed...well together. Not too rushed or too slow.
Loved the line
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm very happy you liked how i wrote Snape!
When Snape goes searching for the first year, Harry Potter; he doesn't expect what he finds.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2019 / 26 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2019 / 26 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Snape's Happy Christmas | 05 Jan 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- Interesting concept. Super short..could have done with a little bit more expansion.
Author's Response:
I was a bit under the weather around that time; 3 weeks of the flu. I should have started sooner, I admit.
I wanted to try something a little different. Thanks for reviewing!
Severus Snape just wanted to enjoy a brief respite over the Christmas Holidays away from students...maybe catch up on his potions journals or lose himself in brewing, but Petunia Dursley showed up on his doorstep with a cat and that all changed.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Dec 2019 / 28 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Dec 2019 / 28 Dec 2019
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Gifts | 05 Jan 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- This was cute. Like the black cat idea. Good job!
After a disastrous fifth-year Potions class with Potter, Severus discovers that Potter is being tortured by Umbridge. With Dumbledore evicted from Hogwarts, there’s little Severus can do to keep his oath to protect Potter. That is, until Severus is given the troubling news that Umbridge has given Potter another detention, thus compelling him to take Potter’s place.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind
Tags: Alternate Universe, Disguised!Snape, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind
Tags: Alternate Universe, Disguised!Snape, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity, Torture
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Feb 2020 / 24 Jan 2020
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!, Multiple Challenges, I Must Not Tell Lies Or Impersonate Potter, Show me your hand Potter
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Feb 2020 / 24 Jan 2020
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!, Multiple Challenges, I Must Not Tell Lies Or Impersonate Potter, Show me your hand Potter
| Title: Chapter 1: antidote | 26 Jan 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- Good start. Curious to see where this is going!
Author's Response: thank you!!
| Title: Chapter 3: care | 05 Feb 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- I like this so far. Blast that Umbridge. She was really a nasty pooped to Pomfrey here.
Author's Response: thank you!!!! and yeah umbridge was just,, Awful. I hated writing her tbh bc being That mean just does not come naturally to me lsjdsklj thank you for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 4: plan | 12 Feb 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- I love Minerva in here. Spot on as I would imagine she would be.
Bit confused as you already had Harry go to Grimauld place in the chapter before and then had it in here like it was new...so that was a bit wierd.
However, liked the chapter and can't wait for Snapes reaction to being tortured by Umbridge.
Author's Response: im glad you like my minerva!! so this chapter picks up at the end of chapter 2 and covers the same span of time as chapter 3, just from Snape's perspective instead of harry's, if that makes sense. (feel free to message me on discord if that's not clear enough lmao) im really glad you like the chapter and i look forward to sharing the next one!!
*COMPLETE* What if you could change your biggest regret? After a devastating event occurs, Snape from an alternate reality is given that chance, but ends up in the canon universe. Will he be able to gain back what he's lost while helping to save the wizarding world at the same time? AU post-OOTP, adopt/mentor, Sick!Harry,
Takes Place: 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry, Kidnapped!Snape, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry, Kidnapped!Snape, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Out of Character
Chapters: 75 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Oct 2020 / 06 Jun 2020
Series: Choices We Made Universe - Challenges: None
Chapters: 75 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Oct 2020 / 06 Jun 2020
Series: Choices We Made Universe - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Failed Him | 08 Jun 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- Really good start.
I especially like the following lines as it brought up very definitive imagery: "Albus knew he would find Severus in here; on the bed in the far right corner of the room under the enchanted window showing the sun setting across the black lake.
Severus Snape was still in his black dress robes from earlier that day, his head cradled in his hands propped up on his elbows"
Only thing I'm a bit confused is I can't tell if you are talking about Muggle Medicine vs Wizard medicine causing the issue. In the beginning it's implied taking the wizard medicine caused the issue, but then near the end it's the other way around.
Author's Response: Thank you! If you're only in chapter 1, then you'll get more information as you go through the story (I believe chapter 4 givesthe first real look at what happened), but there wasn't a really good option either way, is where the choice comes from in the title. I don't want to give too much of it away, but Harry did do wizarding and that was the end result.
Severus knew that Potter, the golden boy had a knack for causing trouble, but he never expected to get stuck inside a snow globe because of the notorious troublemaker.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 16 Jul 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- this is a cute start! I like it so far
Author's Response: Thanks a lot.
A certain event over the summer forces Harry to leave his relatives earlier than expected. As he struggles with the loss of Sirius and the knowledge of the prophecy, Harry starts off his sixth year with more on his plate than ever before. Surprisingly, he finds an anchor in none other than his least favourite Potions Professor. As these unlikely allies struggle to let go of the past, someone is out for revenge...
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Mean
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Mean
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Jan 2021 / 12 Jul 2020
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Jan 2021 / 12 Jul 2020
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Hogwarts Express | 08 Aug 2020 |
| Reviewer: Synfidie (Signed) |
- I'll have a fuller comment next chapter, but why did you make it like Harry had never net Kingsley befo r e? You made the description all mysterious of this person..but he's been introduced before.