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Reviews by Polaris
With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005 Series: None - Challenges: None
The Booby Trap thing is very Snape, it made me laugh. Poor Harry. Thanks for the great chapter! Author's Response: Yeah? I'll see if I can go back and add Snape's reactions in. I thought that he was rather blank, hiding his emotions and reactions. Thank you for your review! During Occulmency lessons in the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Severus notices something... off in Harry's memories.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Dec 2010 / 27 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
I'm always a little hesitant when a snake as a pet is introduced into these stories. I just wonder how likely they are as pets even in the wizarding world and often they are entirely to smart alecky for my liking. I have to say that so far your snake isn't ringing any of those bells which is very rare! I like her and Severus's interactions. I'm very excited that you've updated, I've always really enjoyed this story and used to review over at FanFiction.net. I hope that you beta is more available soon! Author's Response: I think that Potions masters would keep snakes more than others, due to the usefulness of shed skin and venom as potions ingrediants. Miss Sarah was introduced primarily as a non-threatening person for Harry to confide in. As a general pet, I agree that most people wouldn't keep snakes, especially poisonous ones. She doesn't know everything, far from it, but she is and will be a charmingly narcissistic, fiercely protective presence. Harry finds animals easier to relate to than people, so I just gave him a pet that could answer back. Harry is mistrustful of kindness. He's had so little of it in his life that he just doesn't know how to relate to it. Severus is trying. He's not really comfortable with being Harry's guardian, but he's doing his best for Lily. I would also like to say that he has probably the most experience dealing with kids like Harry out of all the teachers at Hogwarts. While not all abused children end up in Slytherin, and not all Slytherins are abused kids, I would think that a significant portion of the children in that house come from less than ideal conditions at home. AU. Harry, on the night the first letter came, was dumped by the Dursley's in London. Now, three months later, he is found and expected to lead a normal life at Hogwarts. But, where Harry Potter is concerned, can anything be normal? Mild abuse, neglect.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 35 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Jan 2007 / 22 Sep 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
It was very much deserved!
Harry is hurt and loses his voice. Will Snape help him find it again?
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 15 Jan 2007 Series: Going Through the Motions - Challenges: None
Great chapter, I'm glad Severus didn't simply give Harry a calming draught, that annoys me to no end in some stories. It just treats the symptoms people! Severus you old softie, bending to the magic word! It's nice for them to spend the holidays together. The little mention of a boy calling him 'pretty' is worrying. I assume this is reference to his attack at Hogwarts. I might need to reread but I don't recall it being mentioned before. Very interesting. Anyway, best of luck with your writing and I hope you have a good week! Author's Response: As far as I'm aware not a single person pointed it out. Lucky me! The "pretty" is meant to be worrying, and it certainly freaked out Harry! And yes, it's from the attack.
Thanks for the review!
I can't believe Albus did that, what an eejit! Was he going to do anything about them yelling at poor Harry?! I'm so glad that Severus heard about the meeting, that was horrible. It was slightly amusing that Harry was embarrassed about the picking up thing. He is an enigma. Loving, loving, loving your story! Is there much more to go now that you've identified the attackers? And the fact that they're Ravenclaws! Crazy, I thought at least one would be Slytherin. There is seriously too much hate in that world. Anyway, hope you're well and good luck with the next chapter! Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you liked it so much. Dumbledore wouldn't have let them keep yelling; it all just happened really fast and he was a bit taken off guard. And yes, as you say, Harry's a bit of a puzzle -- not wanting to be seen as a little kid, but then wanting to be picked up. He's pretty confused about the whole thing. Finally, I didn't want to make the attackers Slytherins because I think the Snakes get a bad rap. Plus that would be too easy.
I reread your story a little over Christmas and it was a great read again. I think it's interesting the way that you've introduced Severus's abusive past and managed to tie it in throughout the whole story as motivations behind his actions and thoughts. Many stories introduce this aspect of Severus's life to help bond him and Harry and then it's kind of forgotten. You should be congratulated on the way that you've really made that part of Severus realistic, and influence his feelings towards Harry nicely. Thanks for the great story, looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: I think Severus' past is a very important commonality between him and Harry, and I think it's important to keep it somewhat in the foreground.
As for the drawing, yes, Snape was a bit stunned, but I think he handles it with aplomb, as you'll see in the next chapter!
I also really love how your story is kind of introducing signs to me. I was watching a movie the other day in which people were signing and I was trying to catch some of the signs I recognized from your story. Do you know sign language or do you have some resource for all these signs? Thanks for the lovely, eventful chapter! Author's Response: I kept Harry's signs very basic, because true signing is a language all its own, with sentence structure and all sorts of stuff that I know nothing about. So I lept it to just single words that wouldn't require an extensive understanding. It's all true British Sign Language though, which is similar in some ways from American Sign Language, but different in others. For example, the sign for father is quite different. So I used a bunch of different British Sign Language sites to help me out. Thanks for your comments!
Author's Response: Yeah, there's a little bit of canon. Not much, but I wanted to give it a nod. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: It's always nice to reread something once there's more availble, isn't it? Thanks for taking the time to comment! |
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