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Harry is beaten and then rescued by an unlikely savior. But, can he cope with the riveting news that follows? SlytherinHarry, GoodLuciusDraco. Very alternate universe!!!

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jul 2007 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Seeing is Believing 30 Jun 2007
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    For your first fanfiction it's not bad, but it is a little hard to follow at times and kinda rushed. I do recommend that you get a beta to go over it as you do have alot of mistakes, and if that was Dumbledore's pheonix in the earlier chapter then it is Fawkes not Faux.

Title: Chapter 8: Malfoy Manor 01 Jul 2007
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    Good chapter. Draco's reaction was very funny. I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Oh and thanks for fixing the Fawkes thing. Most of the time I don't bring up mistakes, but that just bugged me for some reason. I don't know, probably pms or something LOL. Good job

The summer after 5th year, Death Eaters find Harry abandoned in the Dursley house and bring him to Voldemort. Will one particular Death Eater give up his position and his hate to save his enemy's child? Eventual Snape mentors Harry fic.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    Ok, did you just update this today and the site just isn't registering it as a recent update cause if I'm reading the site right, this chapter was added on the 10th. How did I miss it, and for that matter how did everyone else miss it. There aren't any reviews for goodness sake. Anyway, another wonderful chapter as always. I can't wait for their response to Snape being Harry's guardian.

    Author's Response: Hi Dragonclaw,  No, I updated it on Sunday evening, but the site had a glitch, and I wasn't even sure it posted, and I wasn't able to log on at all yesterday to check.  Haven't had time today before now.  I'll try and get the update date changed, as notices won't go out for those who have the story listed as a favorite otherwise.  And thanks for the review!

As a first year, Harry is sorted into Slytherin instead of Gryffindor, and no one is more surprised than his new Head of House.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 51 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Mar 2009 / 21 Aug 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 03 Nov 2007
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    Alexis was right, you did update here. The server went down and they went they brought it back up everything that was updated for the proir two or three days disappeared. So your not crazy, this is the second time you've added this chapter.

    Anyway, another great chapter as always.I'll be looking forward to more when you get the chance.

At the welcoming feast Poppy notices that eleven-year-old Harry is wearing glamours, Severus looks after Harry during the first year, and together they decide to go on a time travel – will they be able to change something? AU, partly OOC.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 02 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Holidays 28 Jan 2008
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    I am really enjoying all your fics, and I do prefer to read them on this site(although if you do decide to delete them I will continue to read af FF.net) I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed. I'm not a very articulate person, so my reviews tend to be things like "great chapter" or "good work". I have actually been put down by authors for leaving reviews like that. I actually had one author write on an AN that stated "if a reviewer can't take the time to write a review and not just an "Ooh, great chapter" then they don't even need to waste my time and they shouldn't expect an appreciative comment from me" This has happened more than once just not in the same words, so needless to say it has kida made me shy away from reviewing. Just know that I really love all of your fics and I will do my best to review them.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I can understand your problem with reviews very well. I often have the same problem - I want to review but I don't know what to write. In that case anything is okay - just let me know that you read and accepted my chapter, 'hello' is all right too - just let me know that you're there. I've seen an author answering in a way like you described it, and I can't imagine how people can be so arrogant. In my opinion, the reader invests quite a time to read a chapter, and that's enough, he/she shouldn't have to invest more time to THINK about what to say in a review. Thanks :-)

Small decisions can change canon events. One small decision can change the fate of not only a small boy, but also an entire world. Fusion with Forever Knight. Minimal mentions of past child abuse/neglect. Complete AU, Pre-Hogwarts through Hogwarts years. No slash.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Vampires
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Mar 2012 / 03 May 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A New Life 04 May 2008
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    OOH this looks like it's gonna be good. I adored Forever Knight(except for the end WAAAHHHH), and of course I love HP so it's a perfect match.

    Author's Response: Just remember the rabid FK fan mantra--Nobody dies.  Nobody ever dies--and you'll be fine.

After a series of tests to discover why Harry's magic has become erratic, a secret is revealed, one hidden for over fifteen years. But not all secrets disappear without consequence, leaving Severus to learn that potions cannot heal everything.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 45 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 29 Jul 2009
Series: Alea Iacta Est - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    Another wonderful chapter, but I do have one question. Why did Severus get so mad when Harry told him that Madam Pomfrey had told his friends. Was he just acting like he didn't know already so Harry wouldn't get more upset, because he was already aware that she had told Harry's friends. (chapter 10)

    Author's Response: *Sighs* That's a very good question. Somehow, I totally thought that I left that part in chapter 10 ambiguous, which I can't believe I did since I checked other things for consistency. I'm calling in the magic consistency fairy to fix the end of chapter 10 because I think the reveal works better in chapter 12, so I should have that fixed in a few hours. Thanks for pointing it out! I would've went like the whole story without realizing it unless I decided to read it all for myself! =)

It was the start of his second year when Harry couldn't force his realization away any longer. He needed a father, even if it was a bad, uninterested father...he still needed one. So what motivated him to ask Severus Snape?

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Dec 2010 / 05 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: In Darkness 25 Jan 2010
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    I really like this fic, and this was another enjoyable chapter. One thing did bother me though (actually it made me laugh out loud) "Hopping from foot to foot and biting his nose" How does one actually bite their own nose. I can't picture it myself, but thinking about it just makes me giggle. LOL

    Author's Response:

    Dragonclaw74,

    Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear that. Oh yes, that was not meant to be there! bite his nose, how does one go about that?! haha, thanks for pointing it out, I'm shocked I missed it :P

    -Mel :)


(UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Cub 16 Sep 2009
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    I am really enjoying this fic. You are doing a wonderful job with it.

Title: Chapter 13: Godric's Hollow 29 Sep 2009
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
    Another great chapter. I really love this story.


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