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Harry is beaten and then rescued by an unlikely savior. But, can he cope with the riveting news that follows? SlytherinHarry, GoodLuciusDraco. Very alternate universe!!!
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Jul 2007 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Seeing is Believing
| 30 Jun 2007
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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For your first fanfiction it's not bad, but it is a little hard to follow at times and kinda rushed. I do recommend that you get a beta to go over it as you do have alot of mistakes, and if that was Dumbledore's pheonix in the earlier chapter then it is Fawkes not Faux.
Title: Chapter 8: Malfoy Manor
| 01 Jul 2007
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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Good chapter. Draco's reaction was very funny. I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Oh and thanks for fixing the Fawkes thing. Most of the time I don't bring up mistakes, but that just bugged me for some reason. I don't know, probably pms or something LOL. Good job
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
| 17 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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Ok, did you just update this today and the site just isn't registering it as a recent update cause if I'm reading the site right, this chapter was added on the 10th. How did I miss it, and for that matter how did everyone else miss it. There aren't any reviews for goodness sake. Anyway, another wonderful chapter as always. I can't wait for their response to Snape being Harry's guardian.
Author's Response: Hi Dragonclaw, No, I updated it on Sunday evening, but the site had a glitch, and I wasn't even sure it posted, and I wasn't able to log on at all yesterday to check. Haven't had time today before now. I'll try and get the update date changed, as notices won't go out for those who have the story listed as a favorite otherwise. And thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
| 03 Nov 2007
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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Alexis was right, you did update here. The server went down and they went they brought it back up everything that was updated for the proir two or three days disappeared. So your not crazy, this is the second time you've added this chapter.
Anyway, another great chapter as always.I'll be looking forward to more when you get the chance.
Title: Chapter 24: Holidays
| 28 Jan 2008
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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I am really enjoying all your fics, and I do prefer to read them on this site(although if you do decide to delete them I will continue to read af FF.net) I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed. I'm not a very articulate person, so my reviews tend to be things like "great chapter" or "good work". I have actually been put down by authors for leaving reviews like that. I actually had one author write on an AN that stated "if a reviewer can't take the time to write a review and not just an "Ooh, great chapter" then they don't even need to waste my time and they shouldn't expect an appreciative comment from me" This has happened more than once just not in the same words, so needless to say it has kida made me shy away from reviewing. Just know that I really love all of your fics and I will do my best to review them.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I can understand your problem with reviews very well. I often have the same problem - I want to review but I don't know what to write. In that case anything is okay - just let me know that you read and accepted my chapter, 'hello' is all right too - just let me know that you're there. I've seen an author answering in a way like you described it, and I can't imagine how people can be so arrogant. In my opinion, the reader invests quite a time to read a chapter, and that's enough, he/she shouldn't have to invest more time to THINK about what to say in a review. Thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
| 04 May 2008
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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OOH this looks like it's gonna be good. I adored Forever Knight(except for the end WAAAHHHH), and of course I love HP so it's a perfect match.
Author's Response: Just remember the rabid FK fan mantra--Nobody dies. Nobody ever dies--and you'll be fine.
Title: Chapter 12: Fight or Flight
| 24 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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Another wonderful chapter, but I do have one question. Why did Severus get so mad when Harry told him that Madam Pomfrey had told his friends. Was he just acting like he didn't know already so Harry wouldn't get more upset, because he was already aware that she had told Harry's friends. (chapter 10)
Author's Response: *Sighs* That's a very good question. Somehow, I totally thought that I left that part in chapter 10 ambiguous, which I can't believe I did since I checked other things for consistency. I'm calling in the magic consistency fairy to fix the end of chapter 10 because I think the reveal works better in chapter 12, so I should have that fixed in a few hours. Thanks for pointing it out! I would've went like the whole story without realizing it unless I decided to read it all for myself! =)
It was the start of his second year when Harry couldn't force his realization away any longer. He needed a father, even if it was a bad, uninterested father...he still needed one. So what motivated him to ask Severus Snape?
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 19
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Completed: No
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Updated: 03 Dec 2010 / 05 Sep 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: In Darkness
| 25 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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I really like this fic, and this was another enjoyable chapter. One thing did bother me though (actually it made me laugh out loud) "Hopping from foot to foot and biting his nose" How does one actually bite their own nose. I can't picture it myself, but thinking about it just makes me giggle. LOL
Author's Response: Dragonclaw74, Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear that. Oh yes, that was not meant to be there! bite his nose, how does one go about that?! haha, thanks for pointing it out, I'm shocked I missed it :P -Mel :)
Title: Chapter 5: Cub
| 16 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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I am really enjoying this fic. You are doing a wonderful job with it.
Title: Chapter 13: Godric's Hollow
| 29 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed)
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Another great chapter. I really love this story.
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