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I'm Yasona! Sorry I won't give away my real name.

I'm a nineteen-year-old college student. With all the wonderful writers on this site, I'm afraid my writing makes me look younger than what I am. 

 I will try to review if I read your story and/or chapter, but it's a new thing for me and I have a horrible tendency to forget.

My family and I have six cats and one dog. Obviously we love animals or I wouldn't name them in the next sentence. Oldest to youngest: Comet, Autumn, Purry (my bro when he was twelve named him), Athena, Louis, and Franklin (at about seven weeks old) are the cats. The last three are kittens and adorable, and Purry's a young adult, and the first two are getting in their years. Theo, short for Theodore, is our puppy's name. He's a black lab mixed with something and hugely energetic.

I hope you check out my stories! And like them. I'm a glutton for constructive criticism! 

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Impalpable by Ria Rose starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 184]
A summer road trip through Muggle America comes to a halt when the car that Ron, Hermione, and Harry have purchased breaks down. Walking to the nearest gas station, Harry encounters the last person he thought he ever wanted to see…and his 1987 Camaro. But there’s a side to Severus Snape that no one knows about: a free riding rebel that would rather don older rock tees than robes and still breaks rules wherever he can. Little do they know it, but the Golden Trio is in for one hell of a summer. - Summer after sixth Year - Non-HBP and DH compliant

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Out of Character, Profanity
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jul 2011 / 26 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Accidently on Purpose 21 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    Wow. I'm still not sure what to think about this story...I know I like it though; it is definitely interesting, and I WANT to know what happens to Mr. Potter. ;)

In The Eyes by Angels Broken Shadow starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Severus is careful never to look Potter in the eyes. To look him in the eyes would be damning.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jul 2008 / 02 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: In The Eyes 04 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    awww, poor snape! you kept him very in character, and wrote it very well.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I really was worried that Snape was out of character here, it's nice to see so many people disprove me!

Shadowland by JAWorley starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 147]
When a portal of sorts opens beneath Harry's feet, he finds himself in a place of undetermined location, with a person he loathes. Where are they? What happened to get them there? And why wont Harry's wand work? Magic, and sometimes lack thereof can form unbreakable bonds... When Magic Fails, how will a wizard survive? Shadowland... where Wizards have to count on each other.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Aug 2008 / 04 Aug 2008
Series: Blood Bond - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Detention's Escape 04 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    Aww man, I got so excited when I saw the next button, but then the next page just said "by" and that was it. This story is really interesting, just watch the spellings of the characters, such as "Myrtl" you just forgot the 'e'. And, though I would check to make sure, as I'm not entirely positive, that "Collin" might be 'Colin.' Anyways, definitely interesting and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    More should be coming!  The site admins said they will post one new chapter a day (but as of now the story is complete).  Sorry about the odd spellings.

    Thanks for reviewing!

    -JW.


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Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Orphan
Rated: - Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 1970 / 01 Jan 1970
Series: The Darkness Within - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Welcome Home, Harry 05 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    I've never read a Harry in Slytherin story quite like this, especially within this chapter. The way Harry acts if refreshing and well-written. It gives new meaning to why he calls the Dursley residence, 'home,' even if it is in a scathing way (of course is there any other way?).

Title: Chapter 7: A Proper Gentleman 05 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    Yay! A nice abuse chapter (wow that sounds sadistic...) and it was nicely done. I liked how Snape just used the cruciatus curse instead of invoking 'divine retribution curse.' The cruciatus fits Snape's temperament, and anyone else's who would walk into such a situation.

    There is a slight awkwardness while describing Privet Drive, Surrey, only because you place "All the houses looked identical" after Snape concluded what the neighborhood seemed like it should be, with the "pump out a kid a year" type of thing. It might work better if you talk about the identical houses before he states what the neighborhood should be. If you get what I'm saying that is.

    But good chapter and happy writing!

    Author's Response: Yes, I see what you mean.  Hadn't give much thought to it until now.  Ha.  Thanks.

The One I Run To by Sa-kun starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
The man leans over the table and presses the cup of tea into Harry’s hand. “Here, have some more. Perhaps it’ll make you feel better.”

Harry doubts it but accepts the cup nonetheless and takes a few mouthfuls. Moments after he’s swallowed the bitter brew he begins to feel cold and his vision blurs.

//

Sometimes safety takes on a strange meaning, but Harry always knew cupboards were safe. He just never knew that he would one day associate Snape along with cupboards and the safety and sense of security they always brought him.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Rape
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Aug 2008 / 23 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!
Title: Chapter 1: Safe'n'Snape 23 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    Nicely done. One small typo: "a pajamas".
    I would like to see more, it does work well as a long one-shot, but I hope you feel inclined to continue some of the issues.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    And that would be my Swedish coming through, sorry.


My Enemy's Enemy by halfblood starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Post OoTP. Alternate Timeline. Harry's had a wretched summer. To top it off, Dumbledore insists he continue studies in Occlumency with the dreaded Severus Snape. Will he and Snape learn to get along?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 34: Atonement 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    This story is amazing. I read it all the way through the most recent chapter and wasn't going to review, but considering hours later I was still thinking it, I thought I should. It's a terrific story, the characters seem very IC to me and it progresses really well. The only thing that bothers me is that how did Harry learn the Imperious curse? Unless perhaps I missed something? I really hope you have a chance to update this soon. :)

    Author's Response:

    Heya thanks for your review sorry it's taken me ages to respond!

    Well the way I saw it was that unforgivables are primarily about having the intention to use them, more than anything else. Like in cannon it's implied that Harry could have used Crucio properly if he had truly wanted to...

     Anyway the new chapter is now up. Hope you like it :)


Buried Alive by Mozalini starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Response to 'Buried Alive' challenge by Yasona Black. When Harry was left at home alone, he could feel trouble brewing around him. Little did he know his life would change that night in more ways than one.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Aug 2011 / 15 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Buried Alive
Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed)
    This was absolutely brilliant! I loved it completely and it's more than I hoped for when I wrote the challenge. I can't wait to read the sequel!


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