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(UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Rhyselle
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 41: On Top of the World | 15 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- This chapter was absolutely astounding! I admit that I wanted to cry when Harry said that the World Trade Center wasn't going anywhere.... and it made me wonder how the Wizarding World reacted to the events of 9/11/2001.
Back to the climax of New Year's Eve, the only proposal I could think of as more romantic was the one my husband made to me many, many years ago. :)
The last scene broke my heart. After the joy of the proposal and the way that Severus finally felt as if he were part of everyone celebrating a new year, new start and new life, being ripped away from his mummy and daddy (and he FINALLY called them that!) was just horrible. Thank Merlin that Harry and Ginny have those mental bonds with him... I just hope that the Malfoys don't have some kind of nasty magic that would block it!
Heh, the Slytherin in me is coming out. If the Malfoys are under constant supervision, which might just moderate their reaction to Severus' behavior, Severus can start throwing the mother of all temper tantrums, bring out all the behaviors that he knows isn't tolerated at home with Harry and Ginny, and so forth, and drive the Malfoy's crazy! *grin* Hey, he might even drive Draco to drink publicly!
In any case, I know that baby Severus is in good authorial hands and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter when you get it done. I've really enjoyed this story very much and I'm putting it on my favorites!
Wonderfully, well done!
| Title: Chapter 42: Here, There Be Dragons | 23 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- A wonderful chapter, even though not-wonderful things were happening in Malfoy Manor. I am so glad that Severus remembered the white magic candle inside himself. :)
I loved the vision of what his future would be with Teddy and Lily and Harry and Ginny and all!
And I'm glad to see Astoria and Narcissa finally stand up against Draco and Lucius! I'm very much looking forward to the courtroom drama, and I'm betting that Sirius and Mooney are going to find that priest who was Harry's lifeline in the East End. :)
Congratulations on your graduation! That's a great accomplishment, and I hope that you celebrated appropriately.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and I know it won't disappoint.Well done!
-- Sequel to Shadowland -- When the world of light has come to pass, and darkness comes to reign, bonds of blood can surpass, and a world of hate be tamed. When times are dark and enemies find they have common ground to stand on, unbreakable bonds can sometimes be forged. Can these bonds hold strong long enough to defeat darkness and once again bring the world into light? Betrayal can be a tricky thing...
Takes Place: 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Sep 2009 / 16 Sep 2009
Series: Blood Bond - Challenges: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Sep 2009 / 16 Sep 2009
Series: Blood Bond - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Dark Times Indeed | 11 Oct 2011 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- Wow! A Minister Fudge whom I can actually respect as a man with intelligence for a change!
That was an excellent conversation between Fudge and Dumbledore, and you set the scene very well.
I laughed out loud about the scolding cookies (they're actually called "biscuits" in Great Britain, you know). Did the Minister and his aides get any of them before they left? *grin*
It's nice to see Harry and Draco getting along. And I'm looking forward to seeing Severus again. On to the next chapter! Well done!
Harry Potter starts Hogwarts with high hopes of finding himself a real family, and holds tightly to this hope despite the torture his new Potion's Master seems intent on putting him through. Can Harry's hope hold out long enough to see his dream through?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Sep 2015 / 23 Sep 2009
Series: JAWorley's Challenges - Challenges: Breaking the Brat
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Sep 2015 / 23 Sep 2009
Series: JAWorley's Challenges - Challenges: Breaking the Brat
| Title: Chapter 14: A Castle Christmas | 12 Oct 2011 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- I can't believe that I missed this story of yours. I really like it a lot!
I especially enjoyed Severus providing Harry with a Christmas tree, and the glowbug spell.
Well done! I look forward to more of the tale in the future when you get the time to write it.
Sequel to "A Better Childhood". Harry and Severus try to find out what to give Alastor for his birthday. When the big party takes place, many unexpected things happened.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Nov 2009 / 21 Oct 2009
Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Nov 2009 / 21 Oct 2009
Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Saying Goodbye | 28 Sep 2012 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- I can't remember if I ever reviewed this before, although I have read it several times. I still love it. :-) It's sweet, and you did a good job with setting up the subplot about Harry's injury, and an excellent job of keeping Sev in 4-year-old character. But what I liked best was when you shifted the point of view to Alastor in the last chapter with all the shenanigans of the birthday party. :-) The very end when he said farewell to the old Severus and faced fully forward to life with little Sev was so very well done. Thanks again for sharing this. It made me smile today.
Author's Response:
And you made me smile because of your wonderful words. I always am glad to hear that some people like my stories that much. This is one of my favs too.
What would have happened if Harry had suddenly become the father of a baby girl at 16? Follow his adventures as he tries to raise a daughter. AU song fic. HP/LL & SS/LE
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry), 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry), 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Oct 2009 / 29 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Make a Story from a Song!
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Oct 2009 / 29 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Make a Story from a Song!
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 26 Apr 2010 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- *sniffle* *smile*
This was just soooo sweet and perfect! Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! Someday I might write some more about Rina and her family.
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 29 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- I found myself re-reading this delightful story this morning and had to tell you how much it made me smile.
I've always loved that Kenny Chesney song, and you did a great job in working it into the fic.
Well done!
Catastrophic events culminate in an unexpected kinship between some of Hogwarts’ most tenacious foes, while inciting bitter battles between best friends.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Torture
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2013 / 30 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2013 / 30 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 | 04 Oct 2012 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what's next! Well done!
I wish I could score this a 20!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I hope to have the next bit posted soon. I'm curious to see how it measures up!
On Christmas Eve, an unwanted child is left in a manger and found by a young Potions Master, changing both their lives forever. AU, implied child abuse, neglect, possible CP, Sev raises Harry.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Feb 2010 / 07 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Feb 2010 / 07 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? | 22 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- Oh, this was just the sweetest story! :) I really like how you've tweaked the canon events and I really like the characterization of Severus Snape here. He's not the nasty Potionsmaster from Hogwarts, but he's still a bit snarky and grumpy at times. Best of all, he knows what joy is, unlike his canon counterpart. And little Harry is adorable!
I loved his first bout of accidental magic! I do hope that you are able to add more to this story over the Christmas holidays.
Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I just posted a new chapter and am working on the next one tonight.
This was what I imagined Sev would be like if he had never been a DE, and had been able to not be torn apart by Lily's rejection of him. Yes, he does, because Harry is there to teach him. Merry Christmas!
Blood magic was supposed to keep Harry safe, but his relatives are expendable. Blood magic was supposed to keep Harry looking like his adoptive father, but it's wearing off. Blood is a bond, but so is the memory of hate -- or love.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Drug use, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Jan 2010 / 14 Dec 2009
Series: Blood Magic Universe - Challenges: None
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Jan 2010 / 14 Dec 2009
Series: Blood Magic Universe - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 84: Epilogue | 08 Jun 2010 |
| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) |
- This was an absolutely amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it and stayed up way too late last night and snuck in reading the chapters during my breaks and lunch at work today. Awesomely conceived and excellently executed! This is going on my favorites and I will be recommending it to my friends to read.
Well done!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Sorry about not responding earlier; I fell way behind. (I'm catching up on the most recent page.) There will be a little more in this universe soon -- not another epic, but a story.