Hufflepuff!
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Instead of the Weasleys coming to get Harry in the flying car, Snape shows up at Privet Drive to rescue him, because he did not not show up for the start of his second year at Hogwarts. Will eventually be a Snape-adopts-Harry fic.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Potterworm
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Oct 2010 / 15 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Oct 2010 / 15 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Inexcusable Actions | 17 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- I quite enjoyed this chapter. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks!
One-shot. Beginning of 6th year fic. Harry is stressed out, feels responsible for the death of Sirius and feels that life is pointless. He attempts suicide and is saved by the last person you would expect.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Jul 2008 / 15 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Jul 2008 / 15 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Unforeseen Savior | 16 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- I feel like this is more of a chapter of a story than a one-shot. You've managed a good writing technique, and you have a good plot. However, I can't help but feel disappointed at the lack of substance to the story. While I understand that one-shots are short, I feel this story opened to many plot lines without closing them also. For example, Snape mentions that he is already beginning to care for Harry, and yet we are neither given or shown why or how. Also, the ending seems to be more of an ending to an exposition prologue than to a story. I'm interested in knowing the rest of the story. It's a decent story, but I wish there was more. (Sorry if I sound harsh.)
Author's Response: It's fine, constructive criticism doesn't bother me much. It's the flames that get to me, haha. Well, I will certainly take your suggestions into consideration and I will attempt to edit the story to improve it as much as I can... although I wouldn't expect to see an edited version up all that soon, as I have a lot more writing to do for my other fic which is chaptered. I would say that I've received pretty good reviews as this is my first one-shot, but I do admit that it is far from perfect. If you are interested, I would check back for an edited and improved version in roughly two weeks. Thanks a lot for the review! :)
Snape punishes Harry for the debacle at the Shrieking Shack, and gets far more than he bargained for.
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Mar 2009 / 18 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Mar 2009 / 18 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: After the Shrieking Shack | 18 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- Please update soon. I'm excited to see what happens.
The man leans over the table and presses the cup of tea into Harry’s hand. “Here, have some more. Perhaps it’ll make you feel better.”
Harry doubts it but accepts the cup nonetheless and takes a few mouthfuls. Moments after he’s swallowed the bitter brew he begins to feel cold and his vision blurs.
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Sometimes safety takes on a strange meaning, but Harry always knew cupboards were safe. He just never knew that he would one day associate Snape along with cupboards and the safety and sense of security they always brought him.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Harry doubts it but accepts the cup nonetheless and takes a few mouthfuls. Moments after he’s swallowed the bitter brew he begins to feel cold and his vision blurs.
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Sometimes safety takes on a strange meaning, but Harry always knew cupboards were safe. He just never knew that he would one day associate Snape along with cupboards and the safety and sense of security they always brought him.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Rape
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Aug 2008 / 23 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Aug 2008 / 23 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!
| Title: Chapter 1: Safe'n'Snape | 26 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- I was looking through your reviews for this story, and I was surprised to find I had never reviewed this myself. This piece is absolutely stunning, almost poetic in a way. I just love that you never gave "The Man's" name. Harry's complete terror was so very real, that I could feel it from my head to my toe's. I was practically shivering. The progression of Snape and Harry's relationship was highly realistic. I think you should post this on ff.net too, since you have an account there, and then you should write companion pieces to this. I'd be quite interested in reading this story from Minvera's perspective or Dumbledore's, for example. I'd love to know Minvera's reaction when she found "Man" in the hallway, after Harry ran away.
At the beginning of second year, Severus agrees to become Harry's guardian, little suspecting the far-reaching effects of this decision.
(Note: The story was also published - in pieces - on Fan Fiction Net, under the titles "Finding a Family", "Losing a Book", "Adding One More", "Sharing a Family", "Saving a Friend", and "Finding a Home".)
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
(Note: The story was also published - in pieces - on Fan Fiction Net, under the titles "Finding a Family", "Losing a Book", "Adding One More", "Sharing a Family", "Saving a Friend", and "Finding a Home".)
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Sep 2008 / 14 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Sep 2008 / 14 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 | 08 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- This was a great story.
There is no such thing as black or white, only a rainbow of grey. Expansion of 'Fairytale'.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2011 / 22 Nov 2008
Series: The Little Child To Lead Them - Challenges: None
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2011 / 22 Nov 2008
Series: The Little Child To Lead Them - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Child | 11 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- Wow, I didn't realize you were planning to continue this. I'm so glad I caught sight of chapter 2, as I enjoyed it very much. Once again, I love the whimical tone to it.
Author's Response: Thanks! It seems to be how I write. Which is nice! It's nice to have a style. :)
An epilogue for ObsidianEmbrace's story 'The 25th of December'. She kindly let me post it.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Jan 2009 / 08 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Jan 2009 / 08 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 08 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- Wait...I'm a bit confused. Did Harry kill himself?
Author's Response: Um. No. Have you read ObsidianEmbrace's story? It really is just an epilogue. Basically, Harry is the boy and, following healing (probably at a hospital due to the extent) he's been allowed down to the dungeons to see Snape. Dumbledore is the guy in the background. Thanks for reviewing.
My take on what would really happen should Snape have to take care of Harry over the summer. Includes lots of mean Snape, angsty Harry and last but not least...spanking!
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jun 2009 / 08 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jun 2009 / 08 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Yes Sir | 09 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- This was really well-written. I liked the lack of happy-go-luckiness, as it made it seem more realistic.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was a bit afraid how people would take it, but so far so good:-)
When Harry goes through some...changes...the summer before his Fifth year, his relatives don't react well. Suddenly Harry finds himself homeless and alone, and learning to cope with yet another whole new world he'd never known existed.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2010 / 20 Dec 2009
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2010 / 20 Dec 2009
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Adolescent Boy | 02 Apr 2010 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- My favorite chapter so far. I'm dying for a nice Harry/Remus/Sirius conversation.
Author's Response: :0) Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks!! (And it's coming...)
Summary to the "HBP Alternate Ending" Challenge by Ponytail Goddess. A world where Draco isn't up to the task of killing Dumbledore and Snape is called to the rescue.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jan 2010 / 07 Jan 2010
Series: None - Challenges: HBP Alternate Ending
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jan 2010 / 07 Jan 2010
Series: None - Challenges: HBP Alternate Ending
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 17 Jan 2010 |
| Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) |
- You wrote something really special here. It was interesting and poignant. I particularly liked when Harry said, Things are going to change now, aren't they? Just a great line.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.