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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Once upon a time a new headmaster dragged a young man in his charge back from the depths of darkness. Now, years later, another boy has turned up to school in poor shape and the Headmaster thinks it’s time for Severus Snape to pay forward what was once done for him, even if said Potions Master goes kicking and screaming all the way. Written for round two of the 2019 Tri-W tournament (even though it’s submitted late). If you like this story don't forget to go vote for it in Site News.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Nov 2019 / 14 Nov 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
I’m loving all the characterizations, even the minor ones. Great job with Ron especially. I’m glad that Harry told in the end. I hope his beliefs can be proven wrong. I really liked the backstory with Severus and his emotions about it. The analogy about the other shoe being dropped tied everything in nicely. Fantastic start. I’m really enjoying this story and your writing. Well done.
I’m really enjoying the dual perspectives of Snape and Harry. Snape being so private and hidden with some things is wonderfully in character. I love the immaturity in Harry growing and developing to understanding things better. Snape teaching Harry about coping skills is golden. The fact that Snape learned it from Lucius Malfoy is soo good. Haha he definitely can’t tell Harry that one. I’m loving this story. It’s fantastic so far! Thank you for writing and posting it!
I loved the delving into Snape’s psyche. The protective relationship Albus had with Snape. How Snape was groomed to be a Death Eater, how it all came tumbling apart. I love how Snape protected Harry, how the more Snape spent on Harry, time or money, the more he cared for him. That was beautiful development. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Super fantastic well done. Thank you soooo much for coming up with this story, for putting the time into writing it and sharing it with us. Terror and destruction seemed inevitable after Voldemort finally revealed himself to the Wizarding World, but at Hogwarts, Harry lives a disturbingly unchanged life. He exists in parallel to the people around him, and as time passes the line between friend and foe stretches into a complex gradient, difficult to decipher. Seeking desperately to become the hero the Order needs, it becomes more and more clear to him how dangerous that prospect is.
But, in a life fraught with crisis and tragedy, what's just a little more? Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape's a Bully, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Dec 2020 / 14 Dec 2019 Series: Makes the Wind - Challenges: None
Great pace, setting, and set up so far! I enjoyed it and am interested in reading more. I can tell this this is going to be a very big, involved story. I haven't had a good one of those in awhile. So, yay! Author's Response: I guess you'll have to wait and find out. :) We hope you enjoy the progression, too! Thank you so much! We appreciate it! Seven months after the Battle of Hogwarts, the wards protecting the school still have not been restored to their former strength.
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Colleague Snape and Harry, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Dec 2019 / 17 Dec 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! Harry threw a snowball and it hit Snape in the back of the head, which started a chain of events no one thought possible. Entry for round 3 of the first ever Tri-Writing Tournament on P&S. Prompts used: snowball fights and Muggle board games. If you like this story, don’t forget to vote for it! If you don’t like it, vote for someone else's story, just be sure to vote! One-shot.
Takes Place: 5th Year, 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption, Elves, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry, Runaway Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Dec 2019 / 18 Dec 2019 Series: None - Challenges: Snowball Challenge
And when Snape said, “I love him.” So beautiful. This is a really realistic way it could of happened. I liked how in character and close to canon it was. I loved the new house and the painted room that is now Harry’s. So sweet. Fantastic ending. Thank you for writing and sharing!!! Christmas is supposed to be a time of giving and caring, but nine-year-old Harry Potter knows the Dursleys will do whatever they can to make him miserable. After a terrible day at primary school, he doesn’t expect the evening at Number Four, Privet Drive to be any better, but perhaps it’s not too late for something good to happen.…
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts Tags: Injured!Harry Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2019 / 21 Dec 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: thanks so much Jan AQ! i'm very happy you like my Snape, i try to make him somewhat canonical, not sure how often i pull it off though ;). hmm, i agree the beginning is probably too long, maybe eventually i'll shorten it up, but oh well for now. thanks so much for your review! When Snape goes searching for the first year, Harry Potter; he doesn't expect what he finds.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind Tags: None Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2019 / 26 Dec 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Severus Snape just wanted to enjoy a brief respite over the Christmas Holidays away from students...maybe catch up on his potions journals or lose himself in brewing, but Petunia Dursley showed up on his doorstep with a cat and that all changed.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Three
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Dec 2019 / 28 Dec 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
For example, lines like this: Potter flinched. "Magic isn't real, sir." Severus arched an eyebrow. "I do believe you were a cat when you arrived." Muah ha! Love ya Snape. We need more versions like this. It's like the character has come alive. I could see Snape and Harry getting along splendidly. You should consider doing sequels. I was a little confused when I first read it - I did not pick up that this was preHogwarts at first and that Harry was eight or nine. If you ever decide to go back and edit I think that could be clearer. I really liked how the beginning and end repeated themselves. Lovely story to read. I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing and posting your mess! Just FYI, I edited your formatting for you so that it is easier to read. :) After a disastrous fifth-year Potions class with Potter, Severus discovers that Potter is being tortured by Umbridge. With Dumbledore evicted from Hogwarts, there’s little Severus can do to keep his oath to protect Potter. That is, until Severus is given the troubling news that Umbridge has given Potter another detention, thus compelling him to take Potter’s place.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind Tags: Alternate Universe, Disguised!Snape, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity, Torture
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Feb 2020 / 24 Jan 2020 Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!, Multiple Challenges, I Must Not Tell Lies Or Impersonate Potter, Show me your hand Potter
I really hope that they get enough evidence to kick Umbridge out. I'm worried that since Snape doesn't have his wand, that Umbridge will catch on and do something to harm Harry, more than the usual detention, which would of course be worse for Severus. Yikes! What a predicament. But of course, this is so in character for Snape. Truly a brave man. Thanks for the update! Great pace. I really like the plan that Severus and Minerva came up with. Author's Response: he's already starting to have his eyes opened about Harry, just from walking around the hallways! (picture Harry striding around Hogwarts, robes billowing behind him, Snape-style, and try not to laugh, I dare you) I can tell you that this fic only has two chapters remaining, so I think that says something about Umbridge's chances after this... and yeah I had to make Snape leave his wand behind otherwise I just couldn't see the detention going the way I had it pictured and the way Snape and McGonagall plan it to, so it made sense for him to leave it behind– for the sake of the plan. Which also speaks to his bravery, I certainly wouldn't want to go spend time under the power of a known sadist while unarmed. Thank you so much for the review!! |
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