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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Ron breaks his wrist after crashing into the Whomping Willow. While he is left to go to the hospital wing, Snape decides to take matters into his own hands with Harry, accidentally discovering his past traumas
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern Tags: None Categories: Fic Fests > Winter fest 2021, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Panic attack, Physical Abuse, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Jan 2022 / 01 Jan 2022 Series: None - Challenges: A Broken Wrist and a Panic Attack
I bet Snape feels guilty. There was one typo, after Harry tells Snape about his Uncle, Snape then calls him “Your father” instead of your Uncle. Poor Ron having to be disciplined by McGonagall later. So his wrist is broken but he is still worried about Harry. He’s such a good friend. You did a great job expressing Ron in the short time he was present in the story. Thanks for writing and sharing! Author's Response: oop! thanks! forgot to fix it. Tysm for the review!!! Yeah, I had some pretty scary teachers IRL. Once my science teacher threatened to throw a shoe at these 2 girls who wouldn't stop talking! It was kind of funny but she seriously took off her sneaker. An explosion happens at Hogwarts due to a charm gone wrong. Harry, in the midst of an ongoing explosion, manages to get separated from his friends. What happens when he gets Snatched up by Snape, and forced to spend hours in a room with his school enemy- Draco Malfoy?
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive Tags: Abuse Recovery Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > Winter fest 2021, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Eating Disorder, Emotional Abuse, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2022 / 04 Jan 2022 Series: None - Challenges: None
I really like your version of Draco. Thanks for writing and posting it! Harry thought having detention with Umbridge over his winter holidays were bad enough, but now his hand is infected, the other students and staff are getting far too deep into the Christmas spirit, and he really just wants to suffer alone.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Injured!Harry Categories: Fic Fests > Winter fest 2021
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Jan 2022 / 06 Jan 2022 Series: None - Challenges: None
After Hogwarts closes due to the petrifications on students and an illness sweeping through Hogwarts, the students are sent home in groups and Professor Snape is entrusted by Albus to take Harry home personally. On Christmas Eve, Snape is surprised to see Potter singing Christmas Carols underneath his window in Spinner's End and brings the child inside with the intention of questioning the child and then taking him home, not realizing he was left in Cokeworth by his horrid relatives. With a letter from the head of the Prince family demanding he come to the Christmas celebrations with his child, Severus decides to pass Harry off as his son in favor of not turning the child over to social services or the Ministry due to his lack of a home. Harry, with no place to go and not wanting to return to the Dursleys agrees to the crazy plan. Can this Christmas be a new beginning for both a man regretting his life choices and child who desires to belong to someone? And how will Harry fare among a pureblood family and in a new school out of his comfort zone? Can the Christmas season make miracles themselves happen?
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Creature!fic Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Fic Fests > Winter fest 2021
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Jan 2022 / 31 Jan 2022 Series: None - Challenges: Another School, Just Pretending (For Christmas), Christmas Carols
I love that Snape loves to bake. I bet it might be something Snape and Harry share as things they both like to do. So when Snape told his relatives he had a child when he was younger, was he telling the truth? Or was he lying? Thanks for writing and posting! I'd love to read more! Author's Response: Thanks. Heh, he is and he's upset that his relatives would leave him alone as well as still being overwhelmed concerning Hogwarts closing and being worried about how he's going to fund his education at a new school. Yet there's also some joy at being away from his relatives which he isn't sure how to feel about, what with other things (the school closing mainly) occupying his mind. Yeah, I don't think I've read many stories that involve Severus knowing to bake. Imagine Severus baking cookies for Christmas with Harry. Well, that may be based more on the christmas tradition in my family where mom and us girls get together and bake cookies during Christmas. Grandmom used to as well but she doesn't do much baking anymore. I'm hoping it will turn out to be something they can bond over. I think in this story, Severus told the truth, however the child passed away when young. Now normally, Arastos will be Snape's son from Lily (older half-brother of Harry) but in this one I think perhaps he had a different child altogether that died possibly in infancy or early childhood. I'm not planning on Arastos being in this one. He does not expect to be forgiven; he vows to never forget.
A one-shot that could be set in the "like poppy and memory"- universe by lesyeuxverts. Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Depressed Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Feb 2022 / 05 Feb 2022 Series: Forget Me Not (inspired by lesyeuxverts' like poppy and memory), Fanfics of Fanfics - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks! Snape finds Harry in the halls, high out of his mind. Snape could have immediately turned the boy in for suspension, but he didn't. He actually cared about the boy's recovery.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts Tags: Addicted!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Snape was really calm and did his best. Draco was really supportive. It's a little bit surprising at how mature he is. Perhaps he's growing up or has other reasons. Harry was really well behaved for what he went through. I'm surprised he didn't try to escape try to find more drugs in his dorm, or in a secret hiding place. The addiction is pretty intense. As it says, this is the first step. :) What will happen when Professor Snape finds out some startling truths about the boy who lived, can the truth change his cold heart and can he truly heal him when arrives at Hogwarts in a much worse state then anyone could have imagined or is it to little to late?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate Tags: Abuse Recovery, Injured!Harry Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Character Death, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Feb 2022 / 18 Feb 2022 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Apologies, didn't realize I'd not replied until I saw there was a new review. Thank you, I agree and am glad you think so
I really like the ending, with the new Lily flower plant growing. Beautifully done. Author's Response: Thank you, I really liked that when I was reading about Floriography and the meaning of the white Lily flower. I thought it was very appropriate, particularly that it said that it grew on the graves of people who had been unjustly killed (or something like that), much as I don't agree with all JK Rowling said I think she put a lot of thought into some of these things as it's very appropriate with a bit of added help from Severus adding his magic to show his undying love for her and now Harry. I have an idea to do another story about Harry thinking about the meaning of the Asphodel and Wormwood question, it may be part of a bigger story. Alternative ending to Not Enough Time starting at the end of Chapter 1. Having seen Harry Potter in a new light can Severus manage to save the boy who lived
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving Tags: Abuse Recovery, Adoption, Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Time Travel Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Feb 2022 / 18 Feb 2022 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks, yes the original sad story needed to be told but I had the idea for what would happen to the Horcrux after he died (all the evidence points to that this wouldn't happen but I wanted to write the idea) and the imagery of Severus finding a very ill Harry abandoned in his cupboard and I guess it grew from there with a bit of rule-bending on the time turners |
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