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Hello Readers,


I am an Eleventh Grade Student in Canada. I like Physics, Math and my Writer's Craft course. 


The Dark, the Light, and the Grey is being translated into Slovakian by Veronica Jane Snape and can be found at the following two locations:


http://hp-stories.pise.cz/34795-the-dark-the-light-and-the-grey.html


http://www.priori-incantatem.sk/show.php?page=fanfiction&action=read&id=5134&autor=VeronicaJaneWailing&hladane=


For those that like Lord of the Rings, my fanfiction in that can be found at fanfiction.net along with none Snape&Harry centric stories.


I have a wonderful beta, my sister, Xandra.


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After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
Title: Chapter 2: Lost Souls 20 Mar 2012
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    Harry dappling in Dark Magic? Well it isn't like anyone would try to arrest him. Besides he did try to Crucio Bellatrix in OotP.

    Latin spellwork class? That sounds awesome! I wonder, if most spells are in Latin, did Roman wizards have to watch what they said, lest they cast a spell?

    Also...there are some other items that might be a bit difficult to obtain," Hermione said with concern.
    It's a horcrux, I hope these other items don't force Harry to choose between his father and last link to his mother, and another person's life.

    Ron seems really juvenile at the beginning of this chapter, and I'd have thought that the Weasleys would still be dealing with the ramifications of Fred's death, and thus, Ron would be able to relate to wanting the dead to return.

    If Harry could heal the cut on his arm instantly with his wand, then why didn't he do that to the snake bite on Snape's neck? I assume that Nagini must have some type of poison in her fangs that prevents the easy closing of the wound.

    Typical Snape, returns from the death and begins his second chance at life by yelling at Harry. :)

Title: Chapter 3: Bittersweet 20 Mar 2012
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    That's a pleasant thing to dream of, your own murder. Especially when it actually happened, not just your mind running amok.

    Yes...Albus Dumbledore had placed his prodigy in harm's way more often than Severus cared to count. Got it in one Snape! :)

    A bit of constructive criticism: I felt that some of the italics in the characters speech became a bit gratuitous here, before you had a really well balanced out sense of emphasis on their words, here it was a bit over the top.

    Uh oh, McGonagall's here. But she heard what he said, so I'm not that concerned, although I look forward to seeing your take on their relationship. :)

    Another great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you.

     

    Yeah, this was my first story, and I did go a little overboard with the italics. As you see, I did cut back drastically as the story progressed.

     

     


Title: Chapter 4: Conflict and Manipulation 20 Mar 2012
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    Nothing quite as awkward as hearing your two best friends giggling in the bed next to you. And with Ginny and all, “It felt like a lifetime since he had held her in his arms”, hasn't it been months since he's seen her? I wouldn't think that an extra day or two would make such much of a difference.

    Dumbledore's still smoothing everything over and trying to take care of things, even though he's been dead for the better part of a year. At least everyone still follows his commands and obeys him as if he were a flesh and blood person.

    Just because Snape is cleared of all charges doesn't mean he'll be treated as such, especially by all the students that suffered under his reign as headmaster and all the people who lost loved ones to You-Know-Who. We still have problems with people today trying to stir up the past and have people punished for things that their families have done in WWII and such.

    “Because of course, you know what a demonstrative person I am”, what a nice thing for Snape to say so sarcastically. :)

    Great chapter once again!

Title: Chapter 5: Unconditional Love 20 Mar 2012
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    Aw, the Scottish Lioness side of Minerva will always have a special place in my heart. Especially when she is telling Dumbledore off!

     "They didn't just...date Ginny. They were...uh... lovers," Harry stated bluntly. And then Harry pulls her into his arms, “I want to be your lover Ginny.” Nice line, and a very Harry way of expressing such a sentiment.

    “Again, desire overwhelmed him, and it took an enormous amount of self control to dampen his amourous inclinations. It's Fred's funeral, a little voice in his head told him firmly.” Not to mention that Ginny is only 16 and underaged, while he is of age now. Maybe he should look take a quick peek at the laws and ask Ginny what she's okay with doing before acting of these inclinations.

    Shouldn't all of the Weasleys be mourning Fred?

    Snape and Lily, Ginny and Harry. I've heard that people often choose spouses that look like their parents, but I've never seen such a blatantly obvious choice. :)

Harry has a vision of what his perfect Christmas would be. A home...a family, and being surrounded by people he cares about . Can his newfound father grant that wish?

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge, Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Dec 2008 / 20 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 1: Heart's Desire 08 Dec 2009
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    That was very sweet. Harry was lucky to have his Christmas wished come true and it certainly seemed to help him get over some of his difficulties with his father.

    Great story!

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much. A little mushy ending, but hey...it's Christmas, isn't it?  :)

The time has come to go back to Hogwarts, but is Harry ready? Struggling to deal with the loss of Shadow, the alarming discovery of his paternity and the problems created by a newly risen Voldemort, the coming term proves to be the most difficult one that Harry has ever faced. Sequel to 'Know Thyself'

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Nov 2012 / 31 Jan 2009
Series: Evolution - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Bad Timing 26 Sep 2009
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    Great chapter! I don't think that Harry will have an easy time telling them that Snape is actually Remus under polyjuice. The scene when Snape cut off his hair for polyjuice potion was rather amusing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Ah, yes, he might have some difficulties there... Lol - I couldn't resist writing a Snape with short hair - it crept up on me! Glad you're enjoying ;)


Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...

NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Omission or Commission 07 Apr 2009
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    flue is actually spelled floo. I like this story. It's interesting and I like your writing style. Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! (and I\'ll fix the error eventually - I thought it was spelled floo but my spellcheck didn\'t like it)

Title: Chapter 7: World War II - part 1 21 Apr 2009
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    This was an amusing chapter! That's an awful lot of detention though. Wouldn't the other teachers be worried that he wouldn't have time to finish his homework and such? And Dumbledore probably thinks that children have to have time to play. I really enjoyed it though, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, lots of detention, but how else is Snape going to get Harry to come near him? Maybe he\'ll loosen up a bit later on, who knows? (I certainly don\'t) :-)

Title: Chapter 9: Axis and Allies 07 May 2009
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    Cool chapter. Tonks and Harry was extremely funny. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I love Tonks. She's awesome. :-)

Title: Chapter 15: A Dog, a Cat, a Harpy, a Bat, a Friend, and a Freak 19 Jun 2009
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed)
    Flint is really getting it bad. It's very amusing. I think Snape gave Harry 'Macbeth' and 'Twelfth Night' I hope Harry enjoys them.

    Author's Response: Yup, you're right about the plays. :-) Thanks for the review!


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