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Reviews by N_Forest
After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008 Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
Latin spellwork class? That sounds awesome! I wonder, if most spells are in Latin, did Roman wizards have to watch what they said, lest they cast a spell? Also...there are some other items that might be a bit difficult to obtain," Hermione said with concern. It's a horcrux, I hope these other items don't force Harry to choose between his father and last link to his mother, and another person's life. Ron seems really juvenile at the beginning of this chapter, and I'd have thought that the Weasleys would still be dealing with the ramifications of Fred's death, and thus, Ron would be able to relate to wanting the dead to return. If Harry could heal the cut on his arm instantly with his wand, then why didn't he do that to the snake bite on Snape's neck? I assume that Nagini must have some type of poison in her fangs that prevents the easy closing of the wound. Typical Snape, returns from the death and begins his second chance at life by yelling at Harry. :)
Yes...Albus Dumbledore had placed his prodigy in harm's way more often than Severus cared to count. Got it in one Snape! :) A bit of constructive criticism: I felt that some of the italics in the characters speech became a bit gratuitous here, before you had a really well balanced out sense of emphasis on their words, here it was a bit over the top. Uh oh, McGonagall's here. But she heard what he said, so I'm not that concerned, although I look forward to seeing your take on their relationship. :) Another great chapter. Author's Response: Thank you.
Yeah, this was my first story, and I did go a little overboard with the italics. As you see, I did cut back drastically as the story progressed.
Dumbledore's still smoothing everything over and trying to take care of things, even though he's been dead for the better part of a year. At least everyone still follows his commands and obeys him as if he were a flesh and blood person. Just because Snape is cleared of all charges doesn't mean he'll be treated as such, especially by all the students that suffered under his reign as headmaster and all the people who lost loved ones to You-Know-Who. We still have problems with people today trying to stir up the past and have people punished for things that their families have done in WWII and such. “Because of course, you know what a demonstrative person I am”, what a nice thing for Snape to say so sarcastically. :) Great chapter once again!
"They didn't just...date Ginny. They were...uh... lovers," Harry stated bluntly. And then Harry pulls her into his arms, “I want to be your lover Ginny.” Nice line, and a very Harry way of expressing such a sentiment. “Again, desire overwhelmed him, and it took an enormous amount of self control to dampen his amourous inclinations. It's Fred's funeral, a little voice in his head told him firmly.” Not to mention that Ginny is only 16 and underaged, while he is of age now. Maybe he should look take a quick peek at the laws and ask Ginny what she's okay with doing before acting of these inclinations. Shouldn't all of the Weasleys be mourning Fred? Snape and Lily, Ginny and Harry. I've heard that people often choose spouses that look like their parents, but I've never seen such a blatantly obvious choice. :) Harry has a vision of what his perfect Christmas would be. A home...a family, and being surrounded by people he cares about . Can his newfound father grant that wish?
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Azkaban Character Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge, Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Dec 2008 / 20 Dec 2008 Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Great story! Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much. A little mushy ending, but hey...it's Christmas, isn't it? :) The time has come to go back to Hogwarts, but is Harry ready? Struggling to deal with the loss of Shadow, the alarming discovery of his paternity and the problems created by a newly risen Voldemort, the coming term proves to be the most difficult one that Harry has ever faced. Sequel to 'Know Thyself'
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Nov 2012 / 31 Jan 2009 Series: Evolution - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you! Ah, yes, he might have some difficulties there... Lol - I couldn't resist writing a Snape with short hair - it crept up on me! Glad you're enjoying ;) Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...
NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat' Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009 Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! (and I\'ll fix the error eventually - I thought it was spelled floo but my spellcheck didn\'t like it)
Author's Response: Yeah, lots of detention, but how else is Snape going to get Harry to come near him? Maybe he\'ll loosen up a bit later on, who knows? (I certainly don\'t) :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I love Tonks. She's awesome. :-)
Author's Response: Yup, you're right about the plays. :-) Thanks for the review! |
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