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I'm an author who is also an avid reader. I love dearly all things that are written well. If I like your story, I review well, and often with a high rating to go with said review. However, I often refrain from reviewing if it's a poor story, or I am very far behind in that story. My name comes from a Japanese Anime movie thing. Though untranslated, it was a good movie, and I liked the main character for which the movie was named. I've adopted that name since. If you haven't seen the movie, Baghi(or Bagi) was a white, anthro cat. I believe albino, as I think she had blue eyes(or at least very light coloured eyes.) That's as far as I'll go explaining it, because it's hard to explain to those who haven't watched it. I have fanfics out, and I hope you'll like them.

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When Harry and Draco are at it again, a tense duel insues. But when happens when the dungeon bat of Hogwarts just happens to be standing by? A spell rebounds and hits him, leaving him completely vulnerable to one Mr. Harry J. Potter... So what happens next? In response to ravenhaired88's Grounded! Challenge.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: K - Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Sep 2014 / 13 Sep 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Grounded!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 14 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    You need to fix the format of your writing pad. It's disconcerting having to scroll left to right to read an entire sentence. Out of curiosity, was this written on Notepad? Kudos for a good start, and no noticeable problems outside of the one I've already stated.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, thank you. But, as stated, I'm new to this site. How would I fix it?

    I used word. 


Draco is exchanging anonymous letters with another Hogwarts student, pen named, Id. Id reveals disturbing information about himself, and Draco finds himself personally invested in Id's troubles. WARNING: It takes awhile for there to be much interaction with Harry and Severus.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Mean
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Sep 2016 / 25 Sep 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Broken Wings 25 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Wait...what...that...how...huh? Is McGonagall for Albus, is Albus really the villain behind it all or did Moody just go crazy? Please don't leave me hanging!!! (Btw, this story is positively Slytherin)

After a year away at Hogwarts, Harry expects his summer to be like all the rest. For better or for worse, there's a big difference this time.

Takes Place: 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Mar 2015 / 13 Dec 2014
Series: To Build a Home - Challenges: Harry's move
Title: Chapter 1: Endings and Beginnings 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    I'm assuming that, along with an AU rating, it's also set during different years? That's the only way Harry would be in the second year during '95, which is when the first Pokemon came out. Except for that glaring fact, nothing out of place and no errors. Hopefully future chapters will give years to them.

    Author's Response: I was never a Pokemon fan myself, so I had no idea. Nah, it's still '92 in this fic. If I can think of a replacement, I'll edit it in, but since it'll likely never be mentioned again I'm not going to stress about it. Thanks for the review! 

Snape puts Harry under a magical leash to keep him out of trouble. But unbeknown to him, Harry has been turned into a vampire, and the leash is causing far more harm than good. Terrified of losing his friends, Harry would rather starve than risk the truth coming out.

Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway, Spying on Harry! Snape, Vampire!Harry, Vampires
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: T - Warnings: Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Jun 2015 / 03 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: The Soul of the Matter 05 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Naw, I kinda expected Lupin to figure it out, knowing he's a WW. They're super-sensitive to vampires.

Title: Chapter 14: In Confidence 11 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Scuze the language but, SHIT! Not good, not good at all. The one person who's the worst to talk around...dear lord, Harry's just left the frying pan and hit the fire.

Title: Chapter 18: Shot in the Dark 09 May 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Y'know, you are as much of a torment as Snapegirl. You write wonderful chapters, then leave it on cliffies! Gah, more please!

Ever wondered what Severus Snape would be like as a kid in a candy store? No, Harry hadn't ever wondered, either - but he's about to find out!

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 02 Mar 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Candy store
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 02 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    What's wrong with a little....harmless fun? Though I seriously can't see Snape ever becoming distracted enough that he wouldn't notice the apothecary walking in.

Harry would always remember it as the summer he got to go to camp and forever escape the Dursleys. Severus would remember it as the summer he allowed himself to stop being blind. In response to the Camp challenge by JAWorley.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Aug 2015 / 08 Apr 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Survivor Camp
Title: Chapter 6: Demon In The Water 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Snape, no matter how mean he was in canon, had a good heart. (The movie had him the first running first to the scene when Ginny left her death note).

Title: Chapter 11: The Reality We All Face 21 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Kudos on finishing this epic story. I understand why there will be no sequel (besides the fact that you put a semi-epilogue in, so no need for a sequel). Sometimes, on long projects like this, no matter how much fun you had making it, you're glad to see it close. Especially stories like this one that are tense and deal with sensitive subjects. Keep writing, and have a good rest of the year.

Bitten by Lupin as a teen as a result of Sirius’ prank, Severus Snape strongly opposes the idea of taking in James’ son. That is, until he sees the way the Dursley family treat the werewolf cub. It will be a long road, but can Harry and Severus heal each other?

Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Creature!fic, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Werewolf!Harry, Werewolf!Snape, Werewolves
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Oct 2015 / 27 Jun 2015
Series: Bats in the Belfry - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Warning Bells 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Tease. That's all I will say. You are a tease with your cliff hangers. More please :3


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