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I'm an author who is also an avid reader. I love dearly all things that are written well. If I like your story, I review well, and often with a high rating to go with said review. However, I often refrain from reviewing if it's a poor story, or I am very far behind in that story. My name comes from a Japanese Anime movie thing. Though untranslated, it was a good movie, and I liked the main character for which the movie was named. I've adopted that name since. If you haven't seen the movie, Baghi(or Bagi) was a white, anthro cat. I believe albino, as I think she had blue eyes(or at least very light coloured eyes.) That's as far as I'll go explaining it, because it's hard to explain to those who haven't watched it. I have fanfics out, and I hope you'll like them.

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Harry makes a wish on a glow-in-the-dark star sticker that his teacher gave him on his last day of school before summer break.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Aug 2015 / 29 Jul 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Wish upon a star
Title: Chapter 4: Wish Granted 05 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Well done, though I think that the star should get more than just a plushie life (though I do love my plushies). Hum, now, I'm going to do something I never do and give you full points. Perhaps you can do more in this vein. Kudos and keep it up.

    Author's Response: Maybe I should have gone with my first impulse, and let the star sticker become a newborn star -- I had it written out like that and everything, and then thought she might want to stay with Harry...perhaps the wrong choice. She could have lived a lovely life as a twinkling star (though, technically they are not 'living' when they are stars). Thank you so very much! :D

Summer fic fest. At one point, early in their life, every wizard needs to submit to surgery. The summer after his first year at Hogwarts, it is the turn of Harry Potter to do so. It’s supposed to be a trifle, but what is ordinary about the Boy-who-lived? Complications will arise. Ghosts from the past will appear and secrets people thought buried for ever are revealed. The question is, in the middle of this ordeal, will Severus Snape at long last find something meaningful to do with his life?

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Aug 2015 / 20 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Petunia, Tell Me The Truth, Surgery
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 A glimpse of truth 31 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Good story; I stuck with it from start to finish. Odd to see Vernon as the person who is more...snivelling. Kudos on the finish...please don't make us wait an entire year for the potential sequel?

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'll see what I can do :-) I have a pretty clear idea of what I would like to do for a sequel - I would skip a year or two and... Oh well, I need to have a bit of rest first. Writing is energy-taxing and time-comsuming and - incredibly fun :-)

Entrance into the summer fic fest of 2015. Someone noticed that Harry was being abused and as a result he was removed from the Dursley’s care. Now he lives with his grandfather in Cokeworth. Enter Severus Snape, who’s in town to clean up his childhood home after his father died.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2015 / 30 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Xenopus, Someone noticed, Lost handkerchief, Puddles
Title: Chapter 4: A Brief Appearance of the Doe 06 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Had Rowling explored Snape's character a bit more, this wouldn't have been a bit ooc for Snape. His memories were evident of that in the final book. Anyway, looking forward to more, though I'm sure I won't be the only one irritated if Joseph dies anytime soon. Keep up the good work!

I could not get the idea of Snape wearing a hilarious "laundry day" ensemble, and being caught doing it, out of my head. Here's the result. :) Hope you enjoy!

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Sep 2015 / 12 Sep 2015
Series: The Headmaster Sings Karaoke - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 12 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Thank you for this happy tale. And oh, it's you Ebbtide! Would you think about expanding on this? Even if it's just hilarious shorts, I love this kind of relationship between Snape and Harry. Kudos, ten out of ten and all that. Honestly, chocolate frogs can't begin to describe my joy at reading something happy, given I just posted something not so happy.

Fluffy and Harry stumble into a bit of a magical mess. Will they be able to help each other back out of it? **Same universe as Laundry Day

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Sep 2015 / 16 Sep 2015
Series: The Headmaster Sings Karaoke - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 16 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Gah! More please. And I dunno if I should be happy or worried at the thought that Fluffy just imprinted on Harry.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 17 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Are they trying to break the familiar bond? I can't see that ending well.

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 21 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    All dogs are overgrown puppies. Yay, finished bond ^^

It's Severus' turn to round up Christmas strays this year, and though he doesn't want to, he rounds up Harry Potter. In response to the Christmas Strays challenge by JAWorley and part of the Christmas fest for 2015.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #20 Holiday Fest 2015
Rated: T - Warnings: Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Dec 2015 / 18 Dec 2015
Series: All I Want For Christmas, Christmas Stories - Challenges: Christmas, Christmas Strays
Title: Chapter 3: Santa's Offer 18 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    I honestly think this chapter turned out perfectly. Maybe a few grammar errors that I missed, but then, if I missed them, probably everyone else did too. It didn't feel forced, nor did it feel lackluster. Honestly, it was about time Harry clipped them round the ears. Though you MIGHT want to fix the year issue, or at least explain it. After all, the Tournament was in his fourth year, DA in his fifth. I understand that this is AU, but without explanation on how you weaved the years together, it is confusing. Kudos, though, on a happy story and making that Snape had a heart without him being too soft.

    Author's Response: Did I make a mistake?  I know there was a moment when Harry was shouting at McGonagall about how people always turned against him, he was just listing times when people were being jerks though.  I was trying to keep everything in order and stick to the timeline.  I know Harry had mentioned about him 'being the boy who had brought Cedric's body back' and also about the one that lied about Voldemort.  Those were both referring to how people felt about him in fifth year because of what the papers said.

Snape sets a lesson on creative brewing. Harry puts his own spin on the challenge. Holiday fest prompts are alcohol, cocoa, and party.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #20 Holiday Fest 2015, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Dec 2015 / 19 Dec 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Christmas Brew 25 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    This is too funny and adorable. Kudos on a good read :3.

Thanks to a meddling Christmas Elf, Severus and Harry's lives will never be the same. Or: the story in which Severus and Harry become gingerbread cookies and Dumbledore has to rescue them from a snow globe.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Adoption, Elves
Categories: Fic Fests > #20 Holiday Fest 2015, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Dec 2015 / 24 Dec 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: This is Not Happening 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
    Ah,how delightful to see some Hawaiian. What a wonderful happy story; kudos on a job well done. Mele Kalikimaka, and mahalo for the story and the sentiment.

    Author's Response: Aloha, I am glad you enjoyed the story. Mele Kalikimaka, and mahalo for the review. :-) 


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