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Reviews by ForgottenEllipses
SEQUEL TO "KEPT BEHIND" Harry might have survived his ordeal as a disembodied spirit, but when the Order is jeopardized by one of its own, Harry must risk everything to save the one that once saved him... even if that person is Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 18 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Nov 2010 / 26 Nov 2005 Series: Kept Behind Series - Challenges: None
And then it just stops. EXCUSE ME? Where is the rest? You're not allowed to do that! Now I'm going to sound like a whiney child. Update, update, update! You have the chapters written already, yes? So update? (Please?) A letter from home sends Harry down a path he'd never have walked on his own. A sixth year fic, this story follows Order of the Phoenix and disregards any canon events that occur after Book 5. Spoilers for the first five books. Have fun!
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Neglect, Self-harm, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 96 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Sep 2007 / 28 Feb 2007 Series: A Year Like None Other - Challenges: None
When Harry finds an injured Snape on his doorstep and must hide him from the Dursleys, he has no idea that this very, very bad day will be the start of something good.
Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story. Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH. Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007 Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
This story is AWESOME!!! You do an incredible job of making it realistic; unlike many stories where Snape and Harry suddenly have an epiphany and become best buds in a week, you are actually stretching it out like it would be in life. Yet, it is not so much so that it is boring. That there is a very fine line to trod upon. Please keep it coming and update update UPDATE! Good luck with future chapters, I can't wait. :D ForEll Dumbledore has an amazing, incredible, crazy-good idea...
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 May 2007 / 28 May 2007 Series: None - Challenges: None
Constructive Critizism: Length could be longer. I'm hoping you're going to go a little deeper in the subject matter here - as of the moment, it seems a bit too platonic and floaty. If that makes sense. Good sense of speed, not to slow, not too fast. I'm wondering how far you actually are going to take this though. Mentorship? Getting into the ansty emotional issues of Harry's inner self at all? And I can't wait to see who is paired with whom. I'm thinking Hermione for McGonagall, Parvati's twin sister maybe for Flitwick? There's not a ton of students mentioned outside of Griffyndor house and Slytherin 7th year, and there's quite a few teachers, actually, not to mention the rest of the faculty. Or are faculty going to be able to be sponsors too? Now THAT could be extremely interesting! Keep updating, PLEASE!!! Summer after fourth year is finally over, and things are not as expected when Harry makes it back to the magical world. Badly broken and determined for it to stop, Harry turns to, surprisingly, a certain Potions Master, who in turn finds within himself, of all places, a heart still beating and waiting to love, and be loved in turn.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 35 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 May 2013 / 23 Sep 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Only minor complaint is that this seems more like an interim chapter; not much in the way of action going on. Maybe the next chapter? **smiles beseechingly up at you** Please post the next chapter! Oh, and keep smiling. Smiles and laughter are good for the soul. :) After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008 Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
For a first timer though, this is pretty darn good! I'm interested to see where some of these plot bunnies are hopping... Author's Response: As you pointed out, this is my first story, so I didn't realise that I was doing that. Live and learn they say, right?
Thanks for the observations though. I'm trying to do better. Someday, maybe I'll go back and fix things, especially in earlier chapters. Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...
NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat' Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009 Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Please update sooner this time, if you can manage it; I know how writer's block goes, but just hang in there! :) Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I can't promise that Harry won't backslide a little - he dictates his moods to me, I just write them. It's frustrating, but I think it's more realistic that way. This sort of thing is frustrating to deal with, and I refuse to do it the disrespect of writing it too easy. That said, I think we are finally making some real progress. The next update should be out in roughly 2 weeks, and Outcast's Alley should update in a week or so. Thanks again for the review! Glad you liked! :0) Harry and Snape have developed an 'understanding'. Unfortunately, when you and your grumpy Potions Professor are unexpectedly thrown into the past, it is possible that this event might have an adverse effect on said understanding... AU, Marauders ahoy! Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In response to the Back to the Marauders' Time Challenge by brightmagic
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 May 2009 / 09 May 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Back to the Marauder's Time
Thank you so much, this story is definitely in my top 5 FanFictions ever! (Not just HP, either.) Congrats, and keep writing! ForEll Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you - it's wonderful to hear that you enjoyed my story so much! Post OoTP. Alternate Timeline. Harry's had a wretched summer. To top it off, Dumbledore insists he continue studies in Occlumency with the dreaded Severus Snape. Will he and Snape learn to get along?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I vote in favor of longer chapters with a longer wait. However, please do continue with the tiny succinct synopsis of the previous chapter; it's very helpful, particularly with long interim waits. Author's Response: Worth knowing the little synopsis is helpful, I know I can get a bit muddled myself and forget what's happening, particularly after a longish wait between chapters... Trouble *does* just seem to follow Harry round, so we will have to see... Thanks loads for your review :) Severus Snape is a complicated man, but when it comes to protecting Harry Potter's life, there is nothing more simple than succeeding. When Severus finds himself caring for the boy after an attack, how will their relationship change? Snape-Harry mentor fic.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape Tags: Adoption, Animagus!Snape, Kidnapped, Pregnancy, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Rape, Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 62 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Feb 2016 / 24 Jun 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Great work, keep it up! I hope we'll get to see some Lucius/Draco interaction, maybe? *grins hopefully* That would be a wonderful way to close up that chapter of his personal problems, and add more drama and angst (YAY, ANGST!) at the same time. |
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