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| Hi! My name is Zabby, and I've always thought that Severus Snape is Harry's bio dad. You can yell at me all I want, but I believe it to be true, so back off bub. I'm a 16 year old junior in high school in the US of A. Not much to say. Check out my FF account if you want to know more. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 96: Epilogue: Severus
| 26 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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You do realize it took me 5 days to finish this wonderfully written story? Normally, it would only take me 3 days (about 30 chapters a day) to finish this. But this had so many plot twists and turns, that I am kind of disappointed that the second in this series isn't this long. Oh well... As Sev says, we can't have everything we want.
Anyway, for constructive criticism... I don't have much to say. My mum and I poured over this story. I think that you have a talent for writing. Go with it! I wanna read some of your books later on!
Zabby
PS. Just remember, the many of us who have read AYLNO are your first and best fans.
The man leans over the table and presses the cup of tea into Harry’s hand. “Here, have some more. Perhaps it’ll make you feel better.”
Harry doubts it but accepts the cup nonetheless and takes a few mouthfuls. Moments after he’s swallowed the bitter brew he begins to feel cold and his vision blurs.
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Sometimes safety takes on a strange meaning, but Harry always knew cupboards were safe. He just never knew that he would one day associate Snape along with cupboards and the safety and sense of security they always brought him.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Rape
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 23 Aug 2008 / 23 Aug 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: Teacher Attack!
Title: Chapter 1: Safe'n'Snape
| 08 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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May I murder the b******? I'm trying to be polite here... Darn... Now I'm going to have to write an obit for a character in my own story...
When 10-year-old Harry goes on an early morning shopping trip for Severus’s birthday present, he discovers a girl half-frozen in the snow in Diagon Alley. Little does he know that his encounter with the snow girl will change his family forever, for she harbors a secret past and a singular gift that could bring an enemy down upon them all unknowing. Tale partially based on “The Little Match Girl” by Hans Christian Anderson. Sequel to A Wolf in Winter, part of the Snowy Encounters series.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 19: A Necessary Humiliation
| 19 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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Was that red-tailed hawk a certain Freedom we know and love? Because, I found that highly hilarious.
And, I love Narcissa in this. You're making it harder and harder to write her as a horrible evil person that I'm trying to.
Author's Response: Uh no, but it was someone else! This Narcissa is a switch from my usual portrayal. I wanted her to be a decent person in this fic. Unlike the way she is in Broken Wings.
Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue: Chasing Rainbows
| 19 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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I'd like to see Narcissa and Snape get together, for some reason. I was just imagining it as soon as I saw that Narcissa was coming to Hogwarts.
Zabby
Author's Response: They may get together in the sequel I have planned for this. In this story arc it would work quite well.
Title: Chapter 40: Sirius Misconceptions
| 23 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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That idiot... Sirius is in for a world of hurt...
Title: Chapter 57: In A Tight Spot
| 16 Apr 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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My only comment on Dumbledore going with them is "Eek!"
I like Major. He`s attached himself to Sev quite nicely.
Title: Chapter 58: A Memorable Vacation
| 19 Apr 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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Happy birthday!!!
The scene with the phone and everything else had me cracking up laughing. Dumbledore with a credit card scared me. Bad.
Severus Snape is a complicated man, but when it comes to protecting Harry Potter's life, there is nothing more simple than succeeding. When Severus finds himself caring for the boy after an attack, how will their relationship change? Snape-Harry mentor fic.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Animagus!Snape, Kidnapped, Pregnancy, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Rape, Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 62
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 10 Feb 2016 / 24 Jun 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Cleared Vision
| 31 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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I'm legally blind and my vision is just over the limit of being legally blind. 20/400 is legally blind. 20/50 is no where near legally blind. 20/50 just means, what people see with regular sight see at 20 feet away, people with 20/50 see at 50 feet away. So, without my contacts or glasses, I can barely see my hand in front of my face. Does that make sense?
But other than the vision thing, good job! I love it!
Title: Chapter 39: Silence Broken
| 18 Jan 2011
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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Well, quick review because I'm going to school in the morning.
I had to get drugged up for a surgery last Friday, and I was like, "Sleep..." the rest of the day... How does Harry do it!
Another good chapter. I like how long it's taking Harry to deal with the fact that Severus is his father.
Again, great chapter. I cannot wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks! Harry can't sleep 24/7 so although he's rather drugged up there's times he has some energy. It's definitely taking time for him to deal with the fact Severus is his father, and the next chapter explores that a bit more.
Title: Chapter 36: The Reason
| 02 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: ForensicFan93 (Signed)
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House.
Another House fan.
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO BRING IN GREG HOUSE!!!!!!! That'd just be the icing on the cake for me. I'd love it. Haha, okay...
Healer House was amazing. Female version on Dr. House.
And while I was reading this, my mom was watching House. Haha. Amazing, by the way.
I'd give this whole story a 11 out of 10 if I could.
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