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Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig? by misundersnape starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 137]
In response to a challenge: During breakfast Hedwig delivers mail to Snape, much to Harry's confusion. Why is his owl delivering mail to Snape of all people? Challenge by: Jan AQ – “Morning Post”

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2012 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Morning Post
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig? 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    And Dumbledore's off scheming and plotting again :)...
    I'm glad you decided to continue the story; I'm looking forward to the third part and the solving of the mystery!

I'm Sorry, Professor Snape by watercrystals starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Harry has a point to prove...

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Jun 2011 / 01 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: I'm Sorry, Professor Snape 01 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    Great little one-shot!I was a bit afraid Snape would explode halfway through Harry's speech, but it seems that Harry actually got his point across and gave Snape something to think about. Very good read, thanks for posting!

Prince of My Heart by Lady Destiny starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Spend the day with three-year Harry and his stern yet loving father, our very dear Severus Snape. Read about how little Harry wraps the Potions Master around his tiny finger. Is complete for now. I'll add more chapters later if any ideas strike! Reviews always help!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jun 2011 / 07 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Breakfast with Harry 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    I have a secret addiction to kidfics, so I was thrilled to see you were posting one! Very nice first chapter; Harry's very cute, and I like his budding Slytherin tendencies.
    As for Snape, I like seeing his softer side; I have to agree with Socks4Dobby though that his interactions with Harry don't always seem in sync with what he know about his personality. To give an example, I'd imagine he might be a bit "rougher" in showing his affection for Harry; he might tease him or call him "brat" (affectionately, of course), or complain about how annoying Harry is when he secretly loves him to bits :). That being said, I very much enjoyed how you showed his relative inexperience in dealing with kids, like telling Harry tall tales about transformed chocolate frogs only to have to comfort him afterwards. I can definitely see that happening :).
    So nice to see you posting here; I hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! Socks4Dobby did mention that Severus was a bit OOC but I had sort of planned it that way. I wanted Severus to be different from what he is portrayed. But like I said before, I agree with both of your views that Severus is the more rougher sort. As I said earlier, if Severus Snape was my father (weird as that sounds lol) I would want him to act in this sort of way. But I'll definitely put into considerations what you've told me! Thank you so much leaving and review and I'll update as soon as my exams are over!

What the Neighbor Saw by aikawa akihiko starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Mrs. Jahoda sees what is going on next door at number four Privet Drive and the only one who will help is Severus Snape

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Bashing, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Jun 2011 / 11 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Someone noticed
Title: Chapter 1: What the Neighbor Saw 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    Great story! I really liked the unique angle with Marie Jahoda, and how you built her personal background into the story. That was very well done.
    Poor little Harry, I'm glad Snape came for him. And of course I'd love to see a sequel! Thank you for posting!

Benediction by Emily Waters starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Half a year after Dumbledore's death, Harry returns to the cave...

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Jul 2011 / 01 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Benediction 02 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    Very very good. You showed very clearly the price everyone payed in the War, those on the side of the Light as well as the Dark. And the ending was almost poetic. Thank you for a great read!

Distorted Affections by darklight1601 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Dobby was right when he said danger awaited Harry at Hogwarts; he was just mistaken on the form it would take.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Rape
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Jun 2016 / 20 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Just Harry 20 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    I really like this so far, bot your writing style and the way you set the scene. I particularly liked the part about Harry's names with the Dursleys versus his names in the wizarding world.
    Wonderful job, please continue soon!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it since it was... well, quite boring actually.  Next chapter's coming.

Title: Chapter 6: Bone vs. Bludger 18 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    I feel so sorry for Harry... Jenkins seems to realize how starved he is for affection, and how easily that can be exploited.

    I love your writing and your sensitive handling of the subject. Looking forward to more!

Everything To Lose by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Severus Snape comes across a runaway… the boy-who-lived to be exact, and drags him back to his home where a struggling Harry is surprised to find Luna Lovegood. Severus had agreed to take custody of Luna at the start of the summer, but taking on the boy who lived to be a pain in his arse as well? Harry is finding out quickly that he’s got everything to lose… and everything to gain. In response to the 'multiple challenges', 'this is home', and 'father to two challenges'.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Runaway, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Aug 2011 / 22 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: This Is Home, Father to two, Multiple Challenges, Minor Canon Character
Title: Chapter 11: When Everything's Made To Be Broken 08 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    I didn't have much time for reading lately, so I read this all in one go just now. Great story so far; I like how you capture teenage Harry's mood swings and tendency to dramatize: everything's a life-changing event, and people are either for or against him. Given Harry's difficult situation, it's no wonder that he's going through all that angst.
    I like that you had Snape treat him harshly at first, because it's realistic; especially after the Pensieve incident, Snape would not be able to shed his prejudices against the "Potter brat" just because he saw him eating from the garbage. That was very nicely done, as was Snape's eventual change of mind.
    I also very much like your Luna, and hope that she'll continue to play a part in the story.
    Thank you very much for writing, I'm looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thanks much!  No worries, because Luna will continue to play a part, although probably not as big of a one now that they are back at Hogwarts.

All That Matters by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Once a green-eyed boy trusted a man in black, until the day Dumbledore was murdered. Now filled with hatred, Harry finds Snape dying in the Shrieking Shack. Can he look past the obvious and find the truth, or will Severus take his secrets to the grave? What matters more, the truth or a man's life?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2011 / 24 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 24 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    What a well-written, thoughtful alternate ending to DH2 - I loved it! I think I'll ignore canon from now on and pretend that this is what actually happened. There were so many great parts that I can't name all of them, but one thing I particularly liked was how Snape asked Sev all of the questions he once asked Harry.

    Thank you so much for writing this - 10 out of 10!

A Promise Well Kept by evelynrosemarks starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Severus was trying to brew a potion that could help him preserve the life of his loved ones, however when testing it on himself intending for it to just take off two years of his life it took off about...hmm...thirty.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Deaging
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Mar 2012 / 24 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Boggarts 29 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
    Poor Severus... but it makes sense that his Boggart would take this form. After all, the thing he probably feared most - Lily dying - has already happened, and he was at least partly responsible. So of course he'd fear himself more than anything else.
    What a thoughtful, well-written chapter! I'm glad Sirius finally saw that Sevvy isn't Snape, and that he has a right to be treated like a kid. Looking forward to more!


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