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Severus Snape comes across a runaway… the boy-who-lived to be exact, and drags him back to his home where a struggling Harry is surprised to find Luna Lovegood. Severus had agreed to take custody of Luna at the start of the summer, but taking on the boy who lived to be a pain in his arse as well? Harry is finding out quickly that he’s got everything to lose… and everything to gain. In response to the 'multiple challenges', 'this is home', and 'father to two challenges'.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Runaway, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Aug 2011 / 22 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: This Is Home, Father to two, Multiple Challenges, Minor Canon Character
Title: Chapter 11: When Everything's Made To Be Broken 09 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    Oh please update soon! I am so glad that Harry finally made his way all the way down, or maybe up to Severus, he needs him and I hope that he will finally open up and get the help he so desperately needs!

    Author's Response: You're wish is granted.  I'm updating right now!  Lol.

After arriving back at school a week early, Harry's new school year is set to be filled with mystery and adventure. Who is the Whispering Man and what does his presence at Hogwarts mean? Is the Wizarding World safe now that He Who Must Not Be Named is returning to power? Join the adventure as Harry, Ron and Hermione navigate their Fourth Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Jul 2014 / 29 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 17 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    Uhhhh, am I looking forward to those classes!
    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Haha, aren't we all? Thanks muchly for the review!

Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man 31 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    man, I am confused! Great chapter though!

    Author's Response: Haha, I hope it's a good confused! (if there is one...) Thanks so much!

Severus refuses to let his efforts of protecting Harry to be in vain. So when Dumbledore reveals to him that Harry must die to vanquish the Dark Lord, he makes a rash and very dangerous decision. They are going to run and find another way to destroy the Horcrux within him as well as the others Voldemort has plaguing humanity.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Sep 2011 / 30 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Like a Pig for Slaughter
Title: Chapter 1: A Required Change of Scenery 31 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    So here the promised review :)
    First: I really like this idea, I always wondered while reading the books how Snape could willingly let dumbledore play with Harry's life so if he truly only ever wanted to protect him, so him taking matters into his own hands seems very promising.
    Second: Harry having this need to stay in the commonroom without any reason does incline that there is some connection both are unaware of and maybe even will stay so, but him being open and willing to listen to Severus, who truly has never sugarcoated anything for him, is totally in character.
    I'm going to skim over the next one and then review that as well and then I won't be able to wait for the third :)
    The only thing i was missing is Snape's normal illthinking of the boy, at least in regard to his father, there was no sneer, not anything that reminded me in some extent to the vile professor he always tried so hard to portray, but still great chapter!

Title: Chapter 2: The Hovel 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    Alright, Chapter two, again good chapter :)
    I like that Harry for once actually realizes how qualified Severus actually is and that he aknowledges it in a way too, and I like that Snape picks up on the attitude, he truly is not one that does well with attitude :)
    I like the plot so far, Sev making sure that they get out of Hogwarts safely and doublechecking with Malfoy, though I really dislike that man, and Sev obviously does as well.
    Great idea to have Sev play him like this.
    The only thing I was missing here was the interaction between Sev and Harry, but honestly, if I would have to find a spot for them to "interact" more, I wouldn't know where to put it, so I guess you did a great job, again.
    Can't wait for the next one, now that I stuck to my side of the deal :)

A few familiar faces return from the dead...as children! Severus, Sirius, and Lily get a second chance to live their lives over again. What things will change, and what will stay the same? With Harry as Sev's guardian, Remus as Sirius', and Lily gets a surprise new family.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Romance/Het
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Apr 2013 / 04 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Second Chances
Title: Chapter 6: Brawl at the Burrow 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    Even though I had to go back a chapter or two, as I couldn't quite remember, I enjoyed it very much again!
    Nice chapter, can't wait for the update!

Title: Chapter 8: Reassurances 08 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    Nice one!
    Can't wait for Remus to explain the Rules to Sirius and for Severus to warm up to the new household even more.
    And it's great that your updating this often :)

Snippets from Harry’s life. Harry's children learn about his life at Hogwarts through bed-time stories, specifically how he was adopted by Severus Snape. Some of the chapters are based on a sentence generated by the idea generator: http://hpideagen.blogspot.com/.

Takes Place: 1st Year, 2nd summer, 3rd Year, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 7th Year, 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Injured!Harry, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jan 2018 / 28 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Grampy Sev, Use The Idea Generator
Title: Chapter 1: The Stories You Never Heard About Grandpa Sev 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    nice! I enjoyed this very much, it'd be great to read more, looking forward to an update ! :)

Back for second year, Harry chooses to follow a new path and it's no simple highway. He's depressed and angry; tired of trying to be someone he's not. Snape may be the only one capable of providing the support Harry needs. OOC Snape and Harry. AU.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Oct 2011 / 01 Sep 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Up and Down 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    oh my goodness! I just read like all of it in one go and I love it!
    I always wondered how Harry never lost it with all that stress.
    Him seeking help in Severus is a great idea!
    I'm looking forward to those sessions, they are promising to be good ones!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I also have wondered how Harry managed so well with such stress, because I know I didn't when I was that age. :) Thanks, again!

What happens when Harry really is as naughty as Snape thinks he is? Why is Harry acting this way and what will the staff do about it? In particular, what will Harry do when he finds out all of his detentions are now being assigned solely to Professor Snape? In response to the ‘Bad Harry’ challenge.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Elf!Harry, Elves, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry, SuperPower! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 May 2013 / 10 Oct 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Bad Harry
Title: Chapter 8: Ashes 11 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed)
    WOW!
    You had me reading this in one go!
    I love it, just totally love it!
    Please update soon, you are portraying Severus and Harry wonderfully, and even Minerva.
    There is so much I could say now, but I am just way to excited.


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