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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 07 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed)
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Great Chapter!
Wow, so Mrs. Weasley. Not so nice in this chapter. Not very surprising though. I can't wait to see Harry and Snape in the next chapter. They both deserve a little time to themselves and a holiday should do Harry some good.
Just before Christmas, Harry hears the basilisk again and believes he's going mad. Why else would he hear a voice that no one else can, talking about blood and death? Unable to take the stress, he flees the castle in the middle of a blizzard. Severus Snape follows him and they end up trapped in a cave, along with a very rare creature. Will they survive to see Christmas morning? Will they finally learn to set aside old grudges and impressions and learn the truth about each other? Christmas 2010 fic! Sick!Harry and sick!Severus, AU, mentor/apprentice, COS.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 18
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 04 Feb 2011 / 07 Dec 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Resolutions
| 04 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed)
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Fabulous story! Very well written and thought our. I loved your Snape and Harry and I thought Ron was incredibly realistic. I hope you get a round to a sequel after you finish your other stories. Maybe a series of one shots. I dunno. Anyway, thanks for sharing!
Cauldron’s bubbled. Potions simmered. And Snape was yelling at Neville again. Just another ordinary day in Potions class, or so they all thought. When a potion reveals something out of the ordinary, Harry’s life is changed forever, and not in a positive way. Was it so unreasonable to ask that he be allowed to make it through sixth year like a normal teenager?
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Great Chapter! I love your story so far. Very well written and the emotions practically scream at you. My heart just hurts for Harry.
Title: Chapter 11: Changeling
| 05 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed)
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Geez, your fast! I like the idea about taking the boys to Durmstrang eventually. That should be really interesting. Keep up the great work.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 16 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed)
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I literally cried at during almost the entire second chapter. I'm talking about weeping here. How bitter sweet! Fabulous story and very beautifully written.
Author's Response: Oh dear, I'm making a lot of people cry today! Thanks for the review and the kind compliments; I'm really glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 5: Truth about Snuffles
| 26 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed)
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Love it! I thought it was very nicely done and I think the way you wrote Harry was great.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much for leaving me a review. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. :D
Wow! Very good start to this story. I love the Harry Remus interaction in this chapter and how realitic Harry was as he was talking to him about Sirius. Snape was great too and I can't wait to see what happens between he and Harry in the coming chapters.
Wow! This is really good. I've never read a fic with this premise before and I am very eager to see where you are going to go with it.
Harry's reaction is going to be interesting to say the least! And the first time he gets his cycle... if you include that. :D
I wonder what you're going to change his name to.
Anyway, wonderful story so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Wonderful second chapter! I think any inconsistencies in he/she actually would make it seem more real. I mean even though Harry is female now, Snape and Bill have always known him as a he so they are both liable to slip up now and then.
I think the Bill and Harry interaction in this chapter was really cute and very well done... and Harry giggling his boobs in the mirror is totally what a teenager would do! :D
I think bringing Fleur in woud be super interesting, by the way.
Anyway, very good. Can't wait for more!
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