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Call me: Christina (female) Member since: 09 Jan 2011
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I never have any clue what to say about myself in these big open boxes but here's a go...

I’m Christina Carrie or Christina, Christy, Christine and if I really like you Tina.


I'm 22.


I live in Eastern NY which is nothing like living in NYC even though it's terribly close.


I I'm college for psychology and I'll go on to do my masters in social work.

I'm a crazy Harry Potter fan (why else would I be here)

I love the color pink (I’m such a tart)

I like fast cars lol(which is why I have two like a retard)….even though I know nothing about them.

The Hamptons are overrated but I love them (even though I’ve essentially grew up in them
all my life)

NYC is expensive, over rated, and smells bad….but if you try to keep me from going there I’ll have to kill you.

Anything else you want to know add me or aim me at stinaxcarrie

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The Stinging Habits of the Western Honey Bee by NicNac starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]
For Want of a Nail. When a honey bee decides not to sting a little boy it cascades into Severus Snape bringing Harry Potter his Hogwarts letter. From there...

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 14 Apr 2011
Series: Honey Bee 'Verse - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: A Late Night Visit 22 Apr 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    Awsome so far, please continue.... scratch that. You BETTER continued or I'll hunt you done.

Hunted by LaileeJane starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
When Harry can't escape Dudley's games, will he be able to hide his injuries?

Response to Lillielle's "We're alone, Cousin" challenge.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Apr 2011 / 17 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: We're Alone, Cousin
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    I liked it but it seemed a little bit rushed. I realize it was a oneshot but I think it needed to ether be longer or the end needed to be a little bit more open. The conflict was just resolved way to quick in my opinion.

    Author's Response: Thank you. The ending was very hard for me--I really wanted to add more, but every time I tried to it would turn into something that would beg me to make it a longer WIP story and I don't want to commit myself to such a task. It was meant to be a snapshot of sorts--Harry is hurt, Harry's injuries are found out, some action is taken. I am considering a companion piece that will add a bit to the ending from Snape's POV so hopefully that will balance it out.

Searching by AllegroAssai starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Neither Snape or Harry are able to do what is expected of them.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Apr 2011 / 23 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 25 Apr 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    Love it! Honestly for a short one shot that was pure awsomeness!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

Mops, Brooms, and Other Random Stuff by rosepetal704 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Harry annoys Snape near to the point of insanity. Again. Big surprise. Fifth in the Potions Class series, but takes place before the last one.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Apr 2011 / 24 Apr 2011
Series: Potions Class - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 25 Apr 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    Um...that didn't make a terrible amount of sense.

Marked By Death by Ebbtide starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Alternate take to the scene where Snape kills Dumbledore. AU. Response to the Avada Kedavra Challenge by Slashypotterness

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Jul 2011 / 10 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Avada Kedavra Challenge
Title: Chapter 1: Marked By Death 10 Jul 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    Thanks for taking my challange! I loved it! I also love how Harry seems to be the sanest one in this fic that just captures the instanity of HBP!

    Author's Response: I know, right!? lol. I'm glad that you liked it. That totally makes my day. ;). It was insanely fun to write. :D. More to come if I have a chance. 

Catch Me if You Can by evelynrosemarks starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Severus refuses to let his efforts of protecting Harry to be in vain. So when Dumbledore reveals to him that Harry must die to vanquish the Dark Lord, he makes a rash and very dangerous decision. They are going to run and find another way to destroy the Horcrux within him as well as the others Voldemort has plaguing humanity.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Sep 2011 / 30 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Like a Pig for Slaughter
Title: Chapter 1: A Required Change of Scenery 31 Jul 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    It seems like a very good idea but if you don't mind a little constructive criticism: you might want to get a Beta to help you with your grammar. Your sentences are a bit choppy, actually at times they are very choppy. I think you have a lot of periods in places that should have comas and you start a lot of sentences with words like “but” and “however” and it makes it really hard to read and it’s a tad distracting. A good stagey I do when editing my stories is reading it aloud-if you feel like you are pausing to much or are getting out of breath when reading chances are you need to ether combine some sentences or add some comas.

Lost and Found by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Abandoned in a Shopping Mall, Saved by a man in black

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Sep 2011 / 16 Sep 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found 12 Nov 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    I really couldn’t keep reading although it seemed like it might have had a lot of potential. It fails in a few areas though:

    1-Your grammar.
    You don’t seem to like commas very much and you have a mixture of run on sentences, choppy sentences and ill placed semi-colons.

    2-Formating
    Your formatting is also all over the place. The periods are supposed to be at the end of the last word of the sentence and on the same line, they shouldn’t be floating on the next line. On another note of punctuation; you’re quotes need to be “like this” you have the quotes “like “ or sometimes on the next line. Your word processor shouldn’t be doing that in less you are forcing it to or using word pad, you really need to proof read.

    3-Quotes
    Besides what I mentioned about the quotes already; ((“Was she a freak like me?” “Can you tell me about her?” Harry interrupted.)) This is an incorrect way to use quotes and you do it a lot. You shouldn’t have quotes right next to each other from the same speaker; you need to either combined or put something in the middle of the two quotes.

    I hope you don’t take this the wrong way but I think you really need to be more careful in your writing and then run it through a Beta reader. A lot of these are silly mistakes but it makes the reader think you didn’t spend time on your story and dismiss it. Good luck on future stories.

    Author's Response: You didnt have to read it, but whatever,I wrote this for fun and if you didnt enjoy it, Well it doesnt matter, thanks for reviewing anyway

Caught by Scarlette starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Upon discovering his self destructive habits, Dumbledore sends a reluctant Harry to Snape's office. Angst ahoy... don't like, don't read. Warnings: Self harm, tired plot lines, cliche angst, and language. Suggestions for future chapters always welcome.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity, Self-harm
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Nov 2011 / 21 Sep 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Confrontation 24 Sep 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    Regardless of length it was another great chapter!! Can’t wait to read more.

Title: Chapter 1: Late Night Intrusions 21 Sep 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    OH!!! I really like this so far! And I love that Snape is in character, he is usually terrible OC and cuddley in these sort of fics. "Oh Harry I was best friends with your mother I should have protected you." BARF! I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

    Author's Response: Appreciated! That's actually why I started writing this to begin with -- I never had much of a taste for OOC Snape, and I figured an issue like this should be able to be dealt with in a canon manner:) Let me know if you have any recommendations for other in-character angst stories! I loves them -- angst porn ahoy!

Do you love me? by Adriana Espan starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
An innocent question made Severus Snape reflect on what happened in the past few months. What would he reply to Harry Potter, his once hated student? One shot.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Dec 2011 / 06 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Do you love me? 08 Dec 2011
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed)
    Cute ^_^

    Author's Response: Thanks!


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