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The Heir to Prince Manor by Snapegirl, DaughterOfAres starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
When Harry wakes one morning, he discovers a badly injured Snape in his living room, and tries to hide him. But Petunia discovers them and reveals a secret she has kept for thirteen years--one that will change the course of Harry's life forever, and Severus's as well. AU, pre-GOF.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2008 / 15 May 2008
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: An Unexpected Visitor 30 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    I read this once long ago. I felt like rereading, mostly because your story is uniquely awesome.

Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Son . . .But Mine 30 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    I think this is one of my most favorite chapters of all time.
    I love how excited Draco was when Sev came for him, and his nickname, Dragonet!
    Also I love the confrontation between Sev and Albus. Albus needs to be told to shove off from time to time. You wrote that brilliantly!

Brothers of Bond by watercrystals starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 173]
On the night of October 31st, when Voldemort showed up to kill Harry, he found that two of his Death Eaters were already there; traitors. That night left two boys orphaned and seeing no other option, Dumbledore placed both boys on the Dursley's doorstep. Draco and Harry grow up bonding as brothers for they're the only other person they've got to rely on. Come their year at Hogwarts, they're both sorted into Gryffindor. But Severus Snape watches them...will he be able to take them in when they need him; his godson and a boy that should have been his son?

Takes Place: 1st Year, 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Oct 2010 / 03 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Orphans 21 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    At some point it would be lovely if you wrote a prologue, with James, Lily, Narcissa & Lucius. I know it would be a huge stretch, but it could be Narcissa (re)connecting with Sirius, perhaps over fear for both their babies. Maybe Sirius was watching Harry that day and he and Draco hit it off. Maybe some accidental magic to gift the other with a favorite toy, or levitating into the same playpen. Maybe Lucius knows Voldemort favors rituals with magical children and he fears for Draco.

    Just anything to tie them together at the beginning.

Title: Chapter 2: Inseparable Pair 21 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    So far I love it. I'd be happy to beta for you if you still need one.

Perception is Everything by Kendra James starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 165]
When Severus Snape is left in charge of Hogwarts over the Christmas break, he is less than pleased to discover Harry will be one of his charges. Events force him to face that Mr. Potter may not be quite what he has assumed all these years.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Sep 2010 / 18 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 26 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    One of my favorite chapters in this fic. Unity is a favorite of mine too.

    I loved professor Vector’s scribbling madly, and throwing it away only to start again.

    And I loved Hagrid noticing the students mixing before most everyone else.

Bastard Prince by RhiannanT starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Book two in the Outcast's Alley series. Having accepted his place in the Court, Tobias must learn how to fulfill it, as well as handle new revelations about his parentage.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Creature!fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Dec 2016 / 24 Sep 2010
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Among Friends 27 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    I've spent the last week or so thoroughly enjoying your stories. You are an incredibly talented writer and I can hardly wait to see what you post next! This story in particular is so unique and well thought out in several areas that I've not come across before. I would enjoy helping you as a beta if you have need of that, though I haven't noticed any mistakes, so it's likely you already have a great one or are doing just fine on you own.

    Things I've loved: the set up of things to come with Malfoy (who I hope is secretly good), and Umbridge ( who has really stepped in it now, and that Harry gave her just enough rope to hang herself).

    The new and varied friendships in different houses, and with Blaise.

    That for once, Dumbledore is clearly outranked by Tobias/Harry's new guardians.

    And of course, the new connection with Severus that hasnt quite developed into what it could yet become.

    Things I'm wondering: why MO's mom sought and chose Harry, how Severus is related to the Unseele Sidhe, how Harry can possibly manage the workload he has, when his protectors will notice his hand(or will it be fully healed by the time they have a chance to notice), if the students of Hogwarts will have a chance to train in Defense and how that might come about, and how Harry will manage to work with all the people at his beck and call, without insulting them in some unintended way, and how his next meeting with Malloy Sr goes.

    Best wishes!
    Kim

What's Owed by JAWorley starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Harry Potter and Mark Evans hung onto each other for dear life in Little Whinging. For three years Harry worried about leaving Mark behind when he left for Hogwarts, and when Mark discovers he’s a wizard, and that Harry’s one too, he finally gets the chance to repay Harry for all the kindness showed him.

Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Feb 2011 / 20 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Mark's Debt to Repay
Title: Chapter 3: Everything's A Mess 20 Jul 2021
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    You did a lovely job. The test they gave SEV about the lamp made perfect sense.

Field of Broken Dreams by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
After getting sixteen year old Harry out of jail over the summer, Severus Snape must deal with a number of things, including: trying to maintain a relationship with his future wife, building a relationship with his future step-son, and trying to figure out the ever-changing enigma that is Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Jun 2021 / 06 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Schemes 20 Jul 2021
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    Definitely nefarious revenge. The glitter bomb was thoroughly Evil.

    You mentioned Harry’s invisibility cloak was safe, but the Map and Photo album were not mentioned. Do they still exist?

    I am anxious to see what will happen concerning the Sword.

Past Featured Story Among The Gemini Trees by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 439]
COMPLETE. Harry and Hermione go to a prestigious summer school, where Snape is a teacher. Unfortunately for Harry, Snape has spoken to the other staff and is on his way to turning the whole school against Harry.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Jul 2020 / 20 Jan 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Another School, Other wizarding cultures
Title: Chapter 21: Lies And Other Untruths 29 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    What a unique story line! I loved the most recent secret revealed and Narcissa's scene. And Rob& Harry's heart to heart. Thanks!

Potions Prodigy by watercrystals starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
When Harry arrived at Hogwarts, no one expected Professor Snape to be his favourite teacher – no one, except the mysteriously familiar witch teaching DADA.

AU. Romance tag is for Lily/Severus, but isn't relevant until later in the story.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Jul 2017 / 25 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Malfoy Malcontent 31 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
    I wasn't sure how much I'd like this fic at first, but I've loved every bit of it!


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