the Phoenix
Ravenclaw!
a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Lucinda Hindle
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Hm, given from Harry's perspective, its rather obvious that he would be distraught. The pattern went the same way, didn't it? Ron was being a bit cool about it, but I don't think that he needed pity at the moment, so I guess, making Harry angry was the best way present to take him out of his brooding.
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Hm, right, what about Severus' extra short and probably very rude note that said that he could go to the Quidditch world cup. What happened? He was kidnapped? What really happened?
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- For a terrifying moment, I too thought that you were gonna kill off Harry. Thank god that you chose not to.
Oh, and you are doing it again. You are skipping over timelines, but I guess I am more or less on track now.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Oh my gosh!!!
Poor Harry. Poor poor Harry.
Janet, I want to know Severus's reaction when Janet told them about how Lily was treating Harry.
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- You know what, you almost made me strangle my computer in order to strangle James.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- In the way of nature?
What do you mean by your end of authors note?
Whatever, the chapter was great.
Now, don't act like an over-sensitive idiot. That reviewer was a f*&^%ng idiot and he shouldn't have said so.
You should not be affected by what he says, such people are quite a few miles below your notice. Almost all your stories have more reviews than I have in all my stories combined, that means that you are an explicitly good writer.
That guy was just a moron, who doesn't deserve you notice. You shouldn't even blink at such reviews, just go ahead and read fabulous compliments.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Err, I know that Harry is a mentally disturbed child, but what is wrong with Sev touching Harry's pencils?
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 17 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- So, err, umm? No, I don't think my father has that tone................
Well, I don't usually talk to him. I never actually talk to anyone with my problems, mostly my friends and Google. The rest of my sanctuary is books, they calm me down and let me live in a different reality.
Hm, I guess a better plan then letting James have Harry would be that Snape murder the Potters, take Harry and vanish from the face of the earth. Home school him, take up a different identity and make a living by inventing potions, maybe try to keep up with Janet, Sirius, Remus and the Weasleys but heck, anything is better then living with the Potters.
a one shot respond to Spring Fic Fest!4.That comment was darker than my wardrobe.
In Severus's opinion time was such a malicious thing. Some thought it would effect people, after all humans aged as the time passed, human's functionality was based on time itself.
Out of all of the manor's residence, well the dungeons anyway, Potter seemed to be the only one also coming to the same conclusion.
time meant hope for a better future.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped
Categories: Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
In Severus's opinion time was such a malicious thing. Some thought it would effect people, after all humans aged as the time passed, human's functionality was based on time itself.
Out of all of the manor's residence, well the dungeons anyway, Potter seemed to be the only one also coming to the same conclusion.
time meant hope for a better future.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped
Categories: Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Out of Character, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Jul 2017 / 28 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Jul 2017 / 28 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; Hoplessness | 14 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Again the chills, feels and goosebumps, this is the second time I am reading this story and its both beautiful and disturbing in a sad way. Will Voldemort not die? Whatever, please do explain the comment about earning death.
Author's Response: thank you for your heart warming review! it literally brightened up my day. i left the ending open for Voldemort, i think that was kind of the point when Harry said that death must be earned, as you know Voldemort's biggest fear was death, hence his main reason for splitting his soul into seven pieces. at that point in the story Voldemort had everything he ever dreamed of; power, blind obedience, and fear. Harry on the other hand didn't, but in the end he finally succeeded to earn the one thing Voldemort didn't have. death. Harry earned death and voldemort didn't, and so Harry triumphed over the dark lord in some way. it is really ironic in a disturbing kinda way, but i hoped i explained it right Luc ;)
a respond to Spring Fic Fest!2. Music is Magic
a music festival is held in Hogwarts, Harry doesn't want to play the flute because it brings back painful memories of his deceased mentor when he was a child. can Professor Snape challenge him otherwise?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
a music festival is held in Hogwarts, Harry doesn't want to play the flute because it brings back painful memories of his deceased mentor when he was a child. can Professor Snape challenge him otherwise?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2017 / 18 Jul 2017
Series: None - Challenges: Musical Instrument
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2017 / 18 Jul 2017
Series: None - Challenges: Musical Instrument
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 14 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Oh god, this was so beautiful. I got a tingling sensation in my stomach and goosebumps on my hands I had always wanted to play the piano but this story gave me so much more reason to play. Music is Magic, I had always known this fact but you proved it.I know you said that this story is finished but what happened with George? What does Dumbledore know about it? I made an account on this website just to review this story, it was very beautiful, beautiful beyond words, I became so frustrated with Harry's denial that I skipped to the end and slowly worked my way up, literally.
Author's Response: thank you sooo much lucinda! i'm really happy that my story inspired you to play a musical instrument, and yes music is magic! about the ending...i was considering writing a cool humor/musical sequel if i end up with the right plot (probably soon) so things will be explained in the sequel, although i will eagerly answer any questions you have;) and can i take a moment to tell you how cool you are and how flattered i am right now?!! wow! /you/ registered in the site just to review on my works, i'm seriously dancing with joy ;) yes, i was frustrated with Harry too, to the point that i wrote this chapter simultaneously with another story so i wouldn't end up blowing it!