|
Membership status: Member
Reviews by Moongrl
After destroying Dumbledore's office, Harry wakes to find himself in the past as an eight year old boy and unable to return to his own time...
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: 16+
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2008 / 16 Aug 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Harry is a runner of drugs, but becomes addicted to alcohol along the way. Severus finds out, and tries to help him.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Self-harm, Violence
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2011 / 25 Jun 2009 Series: Runner - Challenges: None
I'm thinking it is just me, but what is the plot of the story so that I am better able to follow. Author's Response: For one, Harry isn't doing drugs but running them. Basiaclly Harry has become addicted to alcohol, and his uncle is badly abusing him. Sev rescues him, and brings him to Snape Manor. Right now they are just trying to get comfortable with one another. Snape spent a month looking after baby Harry. But now, Harry is back to his 15 year old self. Will life ever be the same again? Sequel to Adventures in Babysitting.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern Tags: Amnesia, Deaged!Harry, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
-
Warnings: None
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Jun 2014 / 15 May 2010 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Noted. And thank you. Everyone seems to have forgotten that the Boy-Who-Lived exists. Harry's friends don't remember who he is. It's a struggle for Harry to hold on to reality as he knows it, while at the same time coming to terms with who he really is. He finds Snape an unexpected ally in the struggle that ensues to reclaim his identity. 6th year AU. (Harry is gay)
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
-
Warnings: Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Nov 2011 / 19 Oct 2010 Series: None - Challenges: None
Severitus-beginning between years four and five. Harry is overcome with guilt over the death of Cedric Diggory and has isolated himsef from those who care. A strange gift arrives on his fifteenth birthday that changes everything.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 37 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Oct 2020 / 06 Jun 2011 Series: None - Challenges: None
Your writing is one of the best I have seen in a long while and continue to enjoy how you manage to keep Snape in character enough that he is recognizable but has enough changes in his person to be believable. It is a very rare thing to see. Everyone said Harry was different, but what if the differences were more than just surviving the killing curse? What if Harry had Autism? How would the wizarding world react and adapt to The Boy Who Lived?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 May 2016 / 12 Sep 2011 Series: None - Challenges: None
Awaited by many, dreaded by one in particular; Harry Potter takes his first steps in the Wizarding World. But he is not exactly as expected. How will the world react to the REAL Boy-Who-Lived?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2012 / 22 Feb 2012 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank for your review, I'm a bit like that too but I was having a major writers block... Will attempt to vary and more on in furture... Hope you'll continue reading my story. Thank You After helping Draco Malfoy escape the custody of Sirius Black, Harry endures the wrath of his Godfather. When Snape comes looking for Draco, Harry tells him that Draco has run away, and that he won’t tell him where Draco is unless Snape takes Harry with him. **Note** I'm aware that some of you don't like bad!Sirius stories. Don't worry, Sirius isn't actually in the story much, however there is redemption in the end. It's not so much that he's just bad, more that he's fallen. This story is about how people fall, and how they can make it back out in the end, getting a second chance. It is NOT a character bashing story.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Addicted!Harry, Animagus!Harry, Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Drug use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jul 2015 / 26 Feb 2012 Series: None - Challenges: Unforgivable Sirius
Ancient magic says that if an innocent magical child is in danger, The Fates may choose to send down two adults: one to guide the child to a guardian, and one to guide the guardian to the child. When the two guides meet again, they will be brought back to the Afterworld, and the child will be left with its destined guardian. No form of authority can come in between this Fated bond.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Resorting, Runaway Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 May 2012 / 07 May 2012 Series: None - Challenges: None
I do want to say, that I am very concerned about changing their names to such an extreme. I generally do not like to read Harry Potter fanfiction but have Harry completely disappear. I know as you are writing it you are picturing a Harry Potter but essentially that character is no more. It is an OC. The conversation they had about how to pick a name was actually very well written if I forget that I am reading about Harry Potter though. You have a great flow to you writing that makes it easy to understand and enjoyable. Author's Response: Okay, I typed out a really long reply to your review because I was excited/stimulated by what you said and I got really into it, but then I realized that you probably weren't looking for a novel-lenght in reply. So the short, normal-person response is: Thank you for taking the time to review my fanfiction! I'm flattered that you think my piece is well-written. Thank you for your concern about the name change (this is the part that got me all excited). I'll try really, really hard not to let Harry disappear completely, and hopefully if you bear with me you'll revise your opinion that I've turned Harry into a complete O.C. I hope that you'll keep reading and responding, and especially hope that you'll continue to let me know how you feel about whether or not you can still find Harry under the cloak. :P Thanks, Cait! ...and if you ARE interested in my crazy-excited ramblings, here's what I originally wrote (Spoiler Alert for later chapters)... First of all, let me apologize for taking so long to respond to this: I was, as I said in the piece, on vacation. Like you, I often shy away from stories where Dudley has magic, but for some reason this time my muse took over. Thank you for saying what you did about the name change. It's not my intention to have Harry disappear completely, although I can certainly see that it would appear that way from how I've set the story up so far. I can only implore you to bear with me a little longer. The name change is actually an important part of the plot. I don't know if you've ever read the Shadow Children series by Margaret Peterson Haddix, but in that series a bunch of children are forced to take on fake identities. In one of the books, a character says something along the lines of, "They might call me Lee Grant, but in my head I'll always be Luke Gardner, and I'm sure none of the rest of you have forgotten your real names, either" (okay, that's a REALLY bad reproduction of the quote, but I haven't read that book since I was, like, ten). ANYWAY, my point is that the name concept has intrigued me for a while. I mean, one of the best lines in The Crucible is when the main character says, "I've given you my soul. Leave me my name!" (That quotation is much more accurate :P) and the title of one of my chapters is based on the Shakespeare quote which says, "a rose by any other name would still smell as sweet." So, anyway, I wanted to get into the name question with this fiction. My thought process was that: 1.) At first, Harry and Dudley would both be excited to change their names because a lot of ten year olds are excited about anything different (I quite distinctly remember wanting to be renamed "Sarah" when I was in elementary school). 2.) Snape is particularly keen to change Harry's name because Harry was named after his paternal grandfather, and his middle name was James. However, he doesn't want to admit that to himself, so he's telling himself that both boys NEED to be renamed. 3.) Later, Harry and Dudley will have different opinions on the name change because, for all that he didn't connect with his father, a part of Harry will want the connection to his parents that he had when he was named Harry James Potter, whereas Dudley will be happy to change his name because he's trying to distance himself from his crazy parents. And...yeah. Stuff will happen. Harry is trying to move on after a loved one’s death. Entry in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts: thunderstorm, buttons in a jar
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012, Misc
Rated: T
-
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 May 2012 / 09 May 2012 Series: None - Challenges: None
I am very impressed! Great job. Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to be as realistic as possible. |
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |