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I'm a 26 year old female with a lovely female partner. I love reading Harry Potter fanfiction. Thought I'd make an account so that I can review all these lovely writings. Write on Everybody!! Maybe (if I get enough inspiration) I might even try writing a fanfiction of my own and I hope you'll be as constructive with your reviews as I'll try to be with mine!! If you want to know more feel free to write to me on my msn email as I won't just accept people I don't know. (Sorry to many bad experiences). I also have yahoo and aim messengers you can get if you write to my email first! Write on everybody! [Report This]
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Reviews by garfield090684

Slow Death by Corbin starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
After being abducted by a servant of Lord Voldemort, Harry begins to deteriorate both physically and mentally. Can he be saved?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Apr 2007 / 21 May 2005
Series: Slow Death and the Price of Service - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Dark Intruder 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    Very powerful piece - wow!

Past Featured Story Whelp by jharad17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 361]
Harry is 7 years old and treated literally like a dog by the Dursleys. Will he be rescued by the wizarding world? Will he ever be fit to take on the mantle of The Boy Who Lived? Now Complete!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Sep 2007 / 18 Jul 2007
Series: A Boy Called Whelp - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 14 Apr 2011
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    Wow! This is quite powerful stuff the kind of thing in nightmares or written about in books but there are some VERY cruel people in this world and you have captured these characters well in your writing. The only thing I feel the need to point out is one typo.

    If you behave like a dog, you'll be treated as one. Should've know you were fit for living indoors with decent folk.

    The second sentence should read

    Should've known you weren't fit for living indorrs with decent folk.

    The way you have it now is a little confusing but its a great story! Write on!!!

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 23 Apr 2011
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    I truly loved this story and am amazed at how well you captured these characters. A wonderful read. Thank you.

    Write on!

An Uncertain Future by Pandora starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 287]
After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
Title: Chapter 1: Dumbledore's Betrayal 13 Apr 2012
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    Wow incredible idea I love it! Also a very well written piece good descriptions and characterisation. I loved it.

    Write on!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Cake for a Potion Master by Baghi starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Harry is caught cooking in the Kitchens by one Severus Snape. Harry manages to stay without losing house points, but what happens afterwards? Written for the Hogwart's Kitchens contest.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 May 2009 / 11 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Hogwart's Kitchens
Title: Chapter 2: Cake for a Seeker 29 May 2012
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    This was a great story which made me smile. Thank you.
    Write on!

Not My Own by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
After a horrific accident, Harry returns to the living world without any of his memories. When memories do reappear, they are not his own. In response to the “Wrong Memories” challenge by Dream Painter. Note: This will be a short 3-5 chapter story.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Stern
Tags: Amnesia, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, New Identity!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Aug 2010 / 30 Jul 2010
Series: JAWorley's Challenges - Challenges: Wrong Memories
Title: Chapter 4: Not Him Either 19 Jan 2013
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    This was a fantastic read well done! Write on!

What Might Have Been: Catalyst by Nightshade sydneylover150 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 43]
How much of Harry's story would have been different if Professor Severus Snape had just looked down at the boy's parchment that first day of class...

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Azkaban Character
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Jan 2011 / 03 Jan 2011
Series: What Might Have Been - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    I absolutely loved this piece! I like how clearly yoyou portray the characters and Harry/Henry opening up to Snape about the Dursley abuse was very well written. My one suggestion to improve the piece would be to explain why Snape is referring to Harry as Henry a little earlier in the piece cos I was quite confused by that but great piece! Write on!

    Author's Response: I'll think about editing it at a different time.  So its up for consideration.  Thanks again!

Changing Fate by Moonsong starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
One single choice leads Remus Lupin to visit the child of his fallen friends, where he sees firsthand the cruelty enacted by the boy’s relatives and makes a decision that changes not only the life of the young boy he’s always loved, but also the life of a broken young man who has been alone for far too long.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Apr 2011 / 04 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Changing Fate 13 Apr 2011
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    I LOVED this piece although it is a bit big for one chapter! :) The idea that Lupin would give Harry to Snape was an intriguing one and I didn't quite understand why Snape took to Harry or why he let Lupin into the house. So maybe a bit of character development between Lupin and Snape is needed? However I read this piece in one sitting - you had me too intrigued to put it down! Loved the idea and thought it was a beautiful piece.

    Write on!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I could capture your interest so. I'm going to write a sequel of sorts eventually, so I'll try to expand upon your thoughts, and hopefully satisfy your curiosity in that regard. :)

Masterful Manipulations by Moonsong starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Albus Dumbledore was a master manipulator. He knew what was best, and he knew how to get it, and how to get you to accept it. He always had the last say, and always got his way, which would eventually become your way (whether you liked it or not). And sometimes, sometimes, you wouldn’t even know that you had been manipulated.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Apr 2011 / 07 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Masterful Manipulations 13 Apr 2011
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    I thought this story was absolutely beautiful and would love to read more fantastic reads like this one. Write on!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I've never done a solely (or mostly solely) dialogue fic before so it was something to experiment with and I'm glad you liked it!

Reflections and Apologies by Nightshade sydneylover150 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
"If that little idiot thought that he was going to be able to skate through on his fame in his class, he had another thing coming."

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Time Travel
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Jun 2011 / 16 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Slither Back
Title: Chapter 1:
Reflections and Apologizes
10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: garfield090684 (Signed)
    Good piece but I was a little confused with exactly how Harry from the future merged with the younger Harry. Could you please make that a little clearer to me? I love the idea and would love to see more come from this. Write on!

    Author's Response: He isn't really yet.  You'll see it come together better in the second part of the story, which I've been working on off and on for the past few months.  Hopefully it will be out soon.  Thanks for reviewing again!


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