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Stuck in a tunnel with an injured Harry Potter was the last thing Snape expected to happen. But when Potter get’s rather loose tongued thanks to a pain reliever, will Snape be forced to re-think his judgments of the boy?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Attackfish
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2008 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2008 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 18 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- I love this story and hope you continue it soon. The sheer number of great lines is amazing.
“You’re going to hate yourself tomorrow,” I routinely feel that way after surgery. Waking up from anesthesia me weepy and incoherent.
“That’s Voldemort’s job, even though I don’t know why--his fault for picking on a baby. Didn’t his mama ever tell him to pick on someone his own size?” priceless
“He just keeps popping up--like acne!” Next time I go to the dermatologist, I'll feel compelled to say that I have Voldemort on my face.
Author's Response: LOL, I wonder what your dermatologist would say to that! Thank you for reviewing!
AU Sevitus. What if Lily never died, but never revealed herself to Harry either? Slowly piece together the mystery of Severus' half-hearted relationship, Harry's parentage, Lily's job, and the truth about James in this time travel fic.
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry), 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Time Travel
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry), 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Time Travel
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 Nov 2009 / 28 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 Nov 2009 / 28 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Part Two | 09 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Wow, It was really uncertain about the premise of the fic, but a few time switches in, you won me over! Write more soon, and I now know what you mean by a scene that had to unfold slowly, really really fantastic.
Author's Response:
Thanks Attack! I'm glad you gave this a chance! This has been incredibly challenging because I have to keep track of what I've given away and what I haven't while writing. I think it's turning out pretty well though and I'm very happy that you liked it. Thank you for your nice compliments!
-P.G.
Waking up in a vacant field, with no memory of his past, Harry finds himself being dragged to the house of Tobias Snape. Will Harry find his way home, or will Voldemort find him first?
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Mar 2009 / 17 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Mar 2009 / 17 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Unexpected Rescuer | 17 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Okay, you have me interested and I've hardly seen anything new yet. Please post more as soon as you're able.
Author's Response:
Yes ma'am! I'll get the third chapter up sometime next week...probably.
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Two Taken, One Returned | 22 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Snape is not too OOC. I love how you gave him a gut instinct. Watch the hipflask bug him.
Author's Response: Thank you Attack!
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster | 18 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Word of advise, try reading the Southern accents out loud. It helps.
I never thought I'd say this, but poor Peter, tortured and killed because for once the slimeball tried to do the right thin, and by the way, screwing that up royally too? Man, Scorpia, you're awful.
Author's Response: Peter didn't really fail, he got Harry away from Voldemort and no one knows where he is--but the bad thing is that NO ONE knows where he is, lol. At least Harry's safe...for a while at least. I'll try reading the accents out loud, thanks!
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Curiosity Makes Trouble | 01 Mar 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- I'm getting impatient for Harry and Snape to get together.
I shall reserve my thoughts as to the canonness of nice Tobias
Author's Response: You'll have to re-find your patience, it won't happen for a while. Thank you for reviewing!
OotP AU Fic."What if" Snape didn't "miss" when he threw that jar at Harry's head after the pensieve incident? Harry suffers from amnesia while Snape begrudgingly takes on the role as his mentor/guardian...but will Snape be able to help Harry recover more than just the return of memories?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Nov 2009 / 28 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Nov 2009 / 28 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Of Odd Feelings and Red Hair | 02 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Ow, head wounds...
Snape needs some pressure valve, poor guy, Poor Harry.
I like this story, (though you do put too much exhibition and tell us too much about what's in each character's head at the start of each chapter instead of showing us) please continue it soon.
Author's Response:
Thankyou! I'll keep that in mind. More to come!
~Clovergirl22
Hedwig, Harry's loyal owl, delivers a message to Professor Snape. The fallout from that letter will be long lasting. Will Harry ever be able to live with Snape knowing his deepest secrets? Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In Response to the Morning Post Challenge by Jan_AQ.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #7 Challenge Fest, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #7 Challenge Fest, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 May 2009 / 01 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Morning Post
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 May 2009 / 01 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Morning Post
| Title: Chapter 1: Duty | 01 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Wow, that's not nice, but wow! I love how Harry goes off on completely the wrong track, and how Snape still has to be a spy. I love, love how Snape takes away the memory. Not able to deal with the shared knowledge?
Author's Response:
Yes, Severus knows that Harry would give him away. Harry is not a person with a great deal of subterfuge where Snape is concerned. I hated having to follow cannon. I always want Snape to live and to come to an understanding with Harry, but that is where the muse took me.
Thanks for the review.
T
Remus, Sirius, James and Snape all take a paternity test. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In response to the Whose Son? Challenge by ObsidianEmbrace.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 May 2009 / 04 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Whose Son?
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 May 2009 / 04 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Whose Son?
| Title: Chapter 1: His Son | 04 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- There are two lines in here I really wish I's written.
“Harry does not belong to anyone, Severus,” Oh Lily, I could kiss you! You are the most human about this whole thing.
"You will both be silent and give me your blood!” Way to channel your inner vampire, James! I laughed out loud at that, and freaked out my professor.
I would like to know which one is Harry's dad out of prurient interest. Did you ever decide?
I love James in this fic, Sirius, and Lily and Snape, (Remus was a bit ooc and blaze) and wow, I'm very impressed. I loved it!
DEATH EATER KIDNAPS BOY WHO LIVED! read the newspaper headlines across magical Britain. SS, HP/HG. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. Response to the Unmagical Harry Potter Challenge by Jan_AQ.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 May 2009 / 05 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Unmagical Harry Potter
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 May 2009 / 05 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Unmagical Harry Potter
| Title: Chapter 1: Running Away | 05 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Damn, that's dark, really really really depressing there at the end. All my favorite characters got out okay, but look, the world's sinking into the quagmire. Oddly, I felt like you left this underdeveloped, and Harry felt very flat and perpetually childish, but overall, I really liked it.
I think this story did to you what mine did to me. The consequences of the story happening that way went way darker than you thought they would, and like any good fic author, you ran with it.
"The Potter family became known for living long, full, and above all happy lives." And monstrously high life insurance rates, of course.