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Reviews by Leilia Snape
(UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I just about had a fit when the apprentice said that the healer's name was House and that she had a muggle cousin. I was laughing for five minutes straight, nearly scared the dog half to death. ;-} I absolutely love that show, and Gregory House. ;-} Chase has to be my favorite though, he's just too cute. *clears throat* Anyways, I loved the chapter and am eagerly waiting for the next one.
Oh my word though, you actually made me cry there in the last part of the chapter. Can we all go and hurt Draco and his father? *starts handing baseball bats out to other readers and looks hopeful* I thought that my heart was going to break with Harry and Ginny's when Sev finally called them Mummy and Daddy, what should have been one of their happiest memories is turning into one of their worst. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And congratulations on graduating!! Leilia What if when Harry sees Snape's memory, it isn't the infamous "Mudblood" memory with the Marauders? What if it is one of the memories that Snape gives to Harry before he dies in DH, and Harry finds out about Snape's deal with Dumbledore to protect him?
Answer to Leilia Snape’s challenge! Written for the Halloween Fest! Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Fic Fests > #8 Halloween 2009, Parental Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Oct 2009 / 29 Oct 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Halloween, Snape's Memory Revisited
First off, let me thank you for writing this wonderful story in response to my challenge. ;-} I loved how Snape could tell if someone else had seen the memories. I have never seen that used in a story before. Another thing that I liked was the final memory, it wasn't that long, but there was so much emotion in there. All told, it was an incredible story, and I really enjoyed reading it. Leilia Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thank you for writing such an inspiring and creative challenge! The second I read it I knew I'd have to respond, it was too tempting to resist. I'm glad you liked the memories too, I spent quite a bit of time writing it (and rewriting it and rewriting it) until I was vaguely satisfied. Oh! And I've just remembered the way in which I found your challenge. I was on your profile because I beta-ered your prompt fest fic (loved it, it was so sweet and well written!!!) and I loved it so much that I wanted to see if you had written anything else. You hadn't but I hope you're going to, you have a real talent! Everyone makes mistakes, even great men like Dumbledore. But was placing six-year-old Harry Potter with Severus Snape the biggest mistake of them all? Or maybe…it could work out after all. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Bravery is Overrated and Boggart Under the Bed.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Child fic Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Nov 2009 / 16 Nov 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I love it. Great Job! I really liked how you portrayed Snape, he was just perfect. I almost fell out of my chair laughing when he and Dumbledore were having their "discussion" at the beginning of the story. I also liked Severus pretending to catch the "boggart" that was under the bed. Very cute story, I would love to see more. ;-} Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I am so glad you enjoyed it, because I enjoyed writing it. Snape is so much fun to write, I always used to struggle with him but I suppose I must be getting a bit better, thanks to all the brilliant P&S fics I read I think! Sequel coming soon! (Warning: My definition of soon is not quite the same as most people's....ie, soon is not that soon at all. But it will be up the second I get some free time, promise.) Harry, once again, forgets to look before he leaps. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: ‘He crawled through the long, tall grass on his hands and knees.’ and ‘Hang on tight, and don’t let go.'
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Nov 2009 / 18 Nov 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I love how you twisted the "Occlumency disaster" into Harry finding doodles of cats. ;-} I do have one question, who's wand did Umbridge snap? I know that it wasn't Harry's, and I sincerely doubt that it was Snape's. Was it a spare that Snape kept in his robes "just in case"? I loved Snape accioing the owl! I just about died laughing, I'm still laughing about it. I can just see Severus standing there, wand in the air, and the owl coming down, flapping and screeching the whole way. ;-} I also really liked how Snape and Hermione got along and all. I loved when Snape told Hermione that he was "the one berating him for his stupidity", and that she could do so later. ;-} All in all, incredible story! I loved every second of it. Leilia Oh, and I think that you might have one thing to correct. When Snape is talking with Rita Sketter he says, "I will introduce to one of the most untraceable, painful poisons at my disposal." I think that it should be, "introduce you to one". Just thought that I might mention that. ;-} Author's Response: Heh - I got kidnapped by an insane plot bunny! There was me trying to write a hurt/comfort, but the craziness kept getting in the way! I shall definitely find a way to work that into the text next chance I get, but in the mean time - it was just a spare wand Snape was carrying around. After all, I thought a spy would have a few. Lol, I can see that poor owl too! Glad you liked the Snape and Hermione bits - and thanks for you review, I loved reading it! I shall have a look at the Skeeter/Snape bit and see what I can do (that bit was a little rushed I'm afraid...) Sev, Lily, and Harry are trying to live as a happy family, running an apothecary in Diagon Alley, after Lily divorced James years before. But James keeps trying to sabotage their relationship out of petty jealousy and tries to get custody of Harry by badmouthing Severus and attempting to ruin his reputation, using all his money and connections to do so. Features a Good! Tom Riddle. An eventually redeemed and de-aged James Potter also. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Scourgify! and Needle in a Haystack
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Child fic, Deaging Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Bashing, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jan 2012 / 19 Nov 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Oh, poor little Harry. Broken arms are no fun. (I know from experience) I loved Lily's line about James not being worth Severus killing. ;-} I also loved Severus dressing down James. Personally, I think that he could have used a little bit more chastisement. Stupid idiot. On the other hand, this would be the perfect leverage for Sev and Lily to use to revoke James's visitation rights. Especially if Harry lets slip what had happened earlier at breakfast. I really love the story, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. ;-} Leilia Author's Response: I know what it's like too. He could have but he wanted to see to Harry first. he was more concerned over his son that beating the snot out James. Yes, it would be and there will be a custody hearing again coming up in the next chapter. Thanks so much! An alternate universe in which Harry decides not to cast Sectumsempra on Draco. Instead, the Potions Master walks in on Draco using the cruciatus on Harry! A response to Bratling's Cruciatus challenge.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Dec 2009 / 28 Nov 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Cruciatus
What's wrong with Harry? And why is Draco so affected? I can't wait to see what happens next. Author's Response: I believe you'll have to read the next chapter to find out, but I'm glad that you've gotten into the story. Thanks so much for reviewing! Summary: "There is someone there. Someone watching us. I can tell. There, over by the bushes." (Hermione Granger to Harry Potter, Christmas Night 1997, graveyard in Godric's Hollow). Christmas 1997 story, compliant to DH 1st half. My guess as to the person hiding behind the bushes? Professor Severus Snape visiting Lily Evans. The story is Snape-Potter mentoring one.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Dec 2009 / 05 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I don't know how you came up with this idea, but it makes so much sense and fills in many holes and questions. I especially like how you put a quote from one of the books at the top and tie it in to the story. Amazing job, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Leilia Author's Response: I am a bit behind in author's responses - sorry for that. The idea - well, I found several things as great ideas in DH (such as Snape being the Headmaster (-:) but I didn't feel Rowling used them to the full potential. So here I am trying to tie the things up a little bit. (-: Hope you will continue to enjoy! (-: On Christmas Eve, an unwanted child is left in a manger and found by a young Potions Master, changing both their lives forever. AU, implied child abuse, neglect, possible CP, Sev raises Harry.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Feb 2010 / 07 Dec 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
I love it. This is a superb story idea, and I can't wait to see where all you take it. I love the was that you have done Severus, I like watching him try to figure out what to do exactly with this creature that he is now responsible for. Kinda reminds me of the first time I babysat solo. ;-} I also love Snape's little one liners, like, "Other people get kittens and puppies for Christmas. What do I get? An abandoned sick baby that happens to be James Potter’s son!" I love it. ;-} I can't wait to see the next chapter. Leilia Author's Response: Thanks very much! Severus is going to be puzzling out that one for several months. yeah I like giving Sev a tart yet funny sense of humor. You can see the next chapter now as I've just posted it! Blood magic was supposed to keep Harry safe, but his relatives are expendable. Blood magic was supposed to keep Harry looking like his adoptive father, but it's wearing off. Blood is a bond, but so is the memory of hate -- or love.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Drug use, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Jan 2010 / 14 Dec 2009 Series: Blood Magic Universe - Challenges: None
I do have one question though. Are we allowed to throttle Colin? Please? ;-} I love the interaction between Severus and Remus in this last little bit. Too cute. ;-} I can't wait to see the next chapter. Author's Response: No throttling the unconcious prat. You have to wait until he's awake! Thanks for the review! It's great to hear what people like. :-) |
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