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Title: Chapter 13: Virtues and Appearances
| 17 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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So... if the muggle minister isn't informed of Harry's innocence then it's likely Harry will be arrested next time he's in the muggle world. (oh joy) Loved the scene in Gladrags.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 2: We All Have Sorrow
| 19 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Damn. Poor Evan. The description of his injuries is worrisome. Is he half blind after all this?
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about whether Evan should be half blind, although it is an interesting thing to consider since Harry was blind when he was reincarnated. I'm glad that you noticed the injuries, no one's asked about them yet :P. Hopefully I'll have another chappie up soon.
Title: Chapter 3: The One
| 08 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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What? Is Harry the heir by blood or magic? And did Lily know about the fae changes that happened to Harry?
Author's Response: No worries, all will be explained. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One
| 27 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Poor Harry! Vernon needs to hexed (preferably with something that Viagra won't fix *hint* *hint*) I hope Snape can manage to help without Albus getting in the way! More please!
Author's Response: I can make no promises, but I will do my best. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two
| 27 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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I like protective Snape. So Dumbles is truly a manipulative bastard. He should be hexed.
Author's Response: To me, Severus always seemed to be the ultimate protector. Harsh when he needs to be, but always there keeping you safe. I heart Sev! Thanks for R&R!
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three
| 01 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Damn that old coot! I like this chapter much better!
Author's Response: I'm glad that someone who read the original has finally told me how they feel. The original version not only felt out of place, but also didn't have the same depth as the others. I had to rewrite it. Thanks you so much for the review.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight - Harry gets a friend.
| 18 May 2010
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Aww,he gets a kitten. I love cats. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I love cats, too. I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
In 'The Goblet of Fire', the 4th year potions classes are working on poison antidotes. Harry is called away before the assignment is complete...what if he had stayed?
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 24 Jan 2010 / 23 Jan 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Poison
| 24 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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This should be longer.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll take that into consideration. :)
"Afterwards, Harry couldn't even remember how he had gotten into the Hospital Wing. He knew there had been blood in his face, maybe on his robes and definitely on his hands. (...) But all he had focused on was the way his heart was beating frantically and how he hadn't been able hear the pulse in his ears that had to be rushing and flowing. He hadn't been able to hear it. He hadn't been able to hear anything. He couldn't hear." - Plays in 3rd year.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 11 Mar 2010 / 15 Feb 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 11 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Ack! TOO Short! Update SOON!!!
BTW: You need to start a new paragraph when you change Who is speaking.
Author's Response: Ack! NO WAY! This means I will have to write more, then, and quickly. A weekend is coming! ;) Thanks for pointing it out, someone else has also reminded me of the formatting. I'll fix it!
Title: Chapter 3: Midnight Confrontation
| 25 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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If he won't talk to Snape, maybe he'll talk to Moon Fire. :)
Author's Response: Good idea! He might just do that. He does like Moon Fire a lot. Thanks for reading!
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