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Title: Chapter 1: A New World
| 28 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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Awww~ this was adorable. The marble gift was especially sweet because, ya know, little kids do that. Harry was such an innocent thing. Thank you a wonderful read! (~.^)
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 19 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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This was cute. Thanks for sharing! (~.^)
ABANDONED:- Five Slytherins, two Hufflepuffs, three Ravenclaws, and two Gryffindors including the Boy-Who-Lived – what do they have in common? Well, a snarky Potions Master, for one. After all, someone has to look out for abused kids at Hogwarts. Sometimes, it's each other.
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Answer Honestly
| 25 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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Intriguing... Can't wait to read the next one! (~.^)
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long. Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 12 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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I'm really interested in how this is going to play out. Chapter 2 just about killed me with Severus. Poor baby. There aren't a lot of things that can break such a man, but that dream... It's a wonder he had held on for so long. I hope this new banding of Draco and Ron&Hermione works out! Save Severus!! Thanks for a good read, and keep updating!
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 13 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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The suspense is killing me! Trap or no trap? Come back with Severus, Dream Team! Thanks for yet another amazing chapter. (~.^)
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 18 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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*crying* This was BEAUTIFUL!! Oh God, I don't even have words for it! Thank you, thank you, thank you for this lovely story! I swear you made my heart ache with Severus and Harry million times. I love happy endings!
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 15 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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ANOTHER CHAPTER!! I must say, I've really enjoyed this thus far. Thank you! You're amazing!
a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?" That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did. He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 06 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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There are three thing I like about this work... 1) It begins with an established relationship between Harry and Severus. You don't usually see a lot of those. It makes it something new. 2) Harry's counting. I haven't seen it before in other people's work. I like reading originality. (plus it made my want to wrap the child in a blanket.) 3) Harry wasn't magically cured from his insecurities. Because a lot of the "adoption" fics begin at, well, the beginning, I always feel like I'm left hanging at the end. How does their life look after all the events that took place? Everything's not a happily-ever-after, how could it be? But, yours had a good balance of the "beginning" (in chapter 2-how Harry came to being adopted by Severus) and the "aftermath", which should really be called the "continuation" (pretty much the rest of it). As for editing, here's a tip. "Dad" should be capitalized if it is used as a name or title, or anything like that. In Harry thinking process, any time he refers to Severus as "Dad", the "d" should be upper case. However, if Harry is referring to Severus as "his" dad, Dad is not capitalized. Examples: "Do you love me, Dad?" // "Harry wondered if his dad loved him." Hoped that tip helped you out. Thank you for a good read. You had me hanging for your last chapter. And I would love to see more... (~.^)
Author's Response: wow! thank you for the brilliant review ;) it warmed my heart. i'm really glad that you liked the plot and character establishment, i always try to trive for originality in my works and it often make me feel self_conscious so it made me happy. i'm also glad that even though the story was done in three chapters it left you feeling satisfied. yes, i actually do plan to continue this fic, perhaps just until the baby's born, because i still feel the conflict and tension between Harry and Jan even though they talked. thank you for the tip and i will edit them as soon as i get the time ;)
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 07 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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My poor sweet, wayward children. Severus is an extremely critical man. He really is his own worst critic. He doesn't need someone to tell him he messed up. He's doing a horrendously fine job of that already! What he really needs is someone to whip him into shape, to help him push away his own demons to tackle those of his son. Enter, Janet! I know she won't let Severus wallow in this self-pitying mood for long! Severus needs to be strong. Strong not only for himself, but for Harry. As powerful and physically robust as Harry is, he needs someone with strength to help him through the emotional and mental pain. I really liked the insight we learned about Severus. Helping fend off Harry's insecurities helps him fend off his own. He's needed, he's WANTED. For the first time he matters. Harry, despite his difficulties, has helped heal Severus. The fact that Severus was comfortable enough to START a relationship with someone, speaks volumes. Until next time. I want to see Harry back in the world of the living soon. (~.^) By the way, these batteries... They must be faulty, because I'm still sitting in darkness.
Author's Response: i completely agree though, Severus is a very critic man, i always saw him a self conscious person trying to maintain distance and remain stoic and bitter to save himself from the supposed blow and disappointment. harry was the best thing that has happened to him, the child brought him some light and hope and helped him to /feel/ instead of brooding his life away. janet is also similar to harry in that aspect, and that's why Sev is so attracted to her in the first place. i am really excited for the next chapter since i actually get to write sev as his formal self, a badass firm parent who stands his ground no matter what, he has the incentive he needs right now and nothing can stop him from achieving his goal.
next chapter will mostly concern Harry and the potters (not in the past) so don't worry, he'll be up and about pretty soon.
i'm sorry about the batteries, i'm sending candles and a match box. they'll last longer. have fun for a few days ;)
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 14 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed)
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"If you were afraid, my darling, Afraid, my darling, I'd be the courage you lack..." --Boat Song by JJ Heller Thought of this song when I was reading! It the sweetest song, look it up! I find myself more willing to take Harry's side of the argument, but I'm a little bias (and proud of it). It was a little sad the Janet was being insensitive about Harry being "abnormal". I wonder if it is because Harry's backstory hasn't been revealed to her. Is Severus holding that back because he thinks Harry should choose to let her know? Thank you for another chapter. You have so many others up, I can't imagine how you manage. Waiting for next time! (~.^)
Author's Response: my goodness! i just listened to that song and wow... i actually wrote the next chapter with it, it was very sweet indeed, i recommend you listen to it again while reading the next chapter too! and i think you're on the right track concerning Harry, i never doubted his instincts(wink, wink)
all of your questions are about to be revealed in the next chapters so stay tuned cause i'm writing like mad and i don't even know how! ;D
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