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Antithesis by mandancie starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 131]
This story is from the Summer Fic Fest. A prompt by Scorpia that I saw on Potions and Snitches website. Harry is kidnapped and Draco is the only one who saw it happen and who knows who did it.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Godfather Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Out of Character, Rape
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Feb 2020 / 21 Jun 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Draco is the Only Witness
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 16 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Okay, this is what? The third time I am reading this? This fic is just sooooo good!

    That "Always" always succeeds in giving me goosebumps.

    So, you had said you would update around December, I am waiting!! :D

    When can I expect an update?

    Author's Response: I thank you for your continuing support of my story. This week is a big week for me as my final papers are due tomorrow (Sunday). I will be finished with this semester on Christmas Eve. After that, I'll be on break for two weeks. I will try and work on my stories during that time. I am hoping that I can post as many as I can. :) Thank you for being patient with me. 

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 04 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Eh, well, it's so long since you updated, but, erm, no pressure. This is the third time I am reading it.......

    Author's Response: I will let you in on a secret. I am almost finished with chapter 20. I have four pages written so far. School work was keeping me from finishing up. I am hoping that I will have it finished and up soon. Thank you so much for your patience and understanding. 

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 11 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Okay, I think I forgot when it was mentioned that Narcissa is dead...
    Anyway, I loved this chapter too. It made me feel so sorry for Harry all over again. And made me want to kill that bastard all over again too, and I have a feeling that I will get these feelings a lot in later chapters too. I have a suspicion as to what Lucius did to Draco but I can't be so sure... We will see!

    Great chapter! Thanks for the update!

Summer of the Unexpected by beargirl1393 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 82]
During the end of Harry's fifth year, it's revealed that his parents weren't James and Lily Potter, and that his biological parent is Severus Snape. How did it happen, and what are they going to do now that they know?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Pregnancy, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Sep 2015 / 30 Jul 2015
Series: None - Challenges: My Mum Severus Snape
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 09 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    You promised not to abandon this, why do so many people break there promises?
    Someone once said, what is the greatest lie of all?
    Promise.

    Author's Response: The story isn't abandoned. This is something that I do for free, in whatever spare time I have. I have a job that takes up quite a bit of my time, as well as my health to look after. When I have the time and motivation to write, then I write. Negative comments simply mean that stories are bumped down my priority list when I do have the time, because honestly? I write because I like to, and if someone's insulting me, I won't want to write. If you don't like my policy, then I'm sorry, but you'll need to find an author who updates with more regularity.

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 12 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Was my last review insulting? If yes, then I am really sorry, I was just disappointed that you hadn't updated in a while. I said so only because your story was so good, so instead of it being an insult, it was, kind of, a compliment. As an author myself, I know how much such comments can hurt, that is why I never outright insult a story, well, I know how stressful it can get, but it would be nice if you just add a small AN which says that this isn't abandoned. I may feel nosy by the way I am telling you this but if you are hurt I couldn't leave it like that. I am a very sensitive person who can't take guilt.
    Sorry, I hope you update at least once this year, well, I am putting it on my favourite now when you say that it isn't abandoned, thank you!!
    Bye, ans sorry if it felt like an insult it wasn't meant to be!

A Happy Ending by darkorangecat starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Harry was de-aged in a potions accident just before summer started, and, because he was at fault, Severus has to look after the five-year-old boy until the potion runs its course. Severus hopes that it won't take the full month, but, with his luck, it will.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Deaged!Harry
Categories: Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Aug 2015 / 13 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Bedtime Story
Title: Chapter 1: A Happy Ending 15 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Squeak!? How undignified of Severus, isn't it? I would like to hear it!
    This was a remarkable story, maybe a little sequel, or prequel?
    Beautiful. The Harry you have written is just so sweet. I love how he hijacks the story.
    Lets see what happens. (In my imagination, because I am going to continue it, inside my mind.)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! :-) 

     I am very happy that you enjoyed this, and would like to see a sequel or prequel. I will see what the muse decides. Right now it is being very finicky. 


Past Featured Story Surgery by Henna Hypsch starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summer fic fest. At one point, early in their life, every wizard needs to submit to surgery. The summer after his first year at Hogwarts, it is the turn of Harry Potter to do so. It’s supposed to be a trifle, but what is ordinary about the Boy-who-lived? Complications will arise. Ghosts from the past will appear and secrets people thought buried for ever are revealed. The question is, in the middle of this ordeal, will Severus Snape at long last find something meaningful to do with his life?

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Aug 2015 / 20 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Petunia, Tell Me The Truth, Surgery
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A persistent stomach ache 02 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    I feel for Harry, being a women, I feel for Harry. Gah, it happens to me every damn month for at least 3 days. I totally fell for Harry.

    Anyway, the way you made Vernon the (Ahem) 'good' one. Still, the abuse is not that much, and being the sadistic girl I am, I wanted it to be more.

    Whatsoever, I like the story so far, and am I correct in assuming that the letter will get in the hands of Snape? Or will he be sent in charge of the surgery?

Misjudged by Dobby246 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Trapped on a mountain, Snape learns some disturbing truths about the Dursley's. Will he help save Harry from the abuse, or turn a blind eye like everyone else?

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Sep 2015 / 29 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 08 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    I am pretty damn sure that you are not going to update. No one ever does. I have read so many potentially best selling fanfictions which are sadly, really very sadly abandoned.
    AND, if that wasn't bad enough, you had to go and end the chapter just when the juicy stuff started happening, didn't you.
    I guess I am in shock that I have reached a great number of 79 (Yep, I keep the record of every single fanfiction.) stories that have been abandoned.

The Fawn in Cokeworth by MsHuntergrl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Entrance into the summer fic fest of 2015. Someone noticed that Harry was being abused and as a result he was removed from the Dursley’s care. Now he lives with his grandfather in Cokeworth. Enter Severus Snape, who’s in town to clean up his childhood home after his father died.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2015 / 30 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Xenopus, Someone noticed, Lost handkerchief, Puddles
Title: Chapter 4: A Brief Appearance of the Doe 08 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    If, and I mean if, you even THINK of killing Joseph, I am gonna torture you to oblivion.

Growing Up Hogwarts by Dream Painter starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
ABANDONED:- When the wards suddenly fall at Privet Drive, members of the Order immediately apparate to the location to find the Dursley parents dead – and their mistreated nephew locked in the cupboard under the stairs. Retrieving the boy is but the start of a long road to recovery. Can time truly heal? Or will even the magic of Hogwarts prove inadequate sanctuary for a wary, abused child?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Oct 2015 / 20 Sep 2015
Series: None - Challenges: The Theft
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 08 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Aww, I just want to go and cuddle Harry, though, somehow I don't think that he would appreciate it.
    You aren't going to update, are you?


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