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Title: Chapter 38: Pain
| 22 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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Awww poor Harry. this is probably one of the best sick Harry stories I've read. I can't wait to see if harry goes in remmission. I love the interaction between harry and snape. i'm glad they did not just jump into a father/son relationship but are gradually getting there.
well done with this chapter. update soon.
Author's Response: I'm honored to be included in one of the best sick Harry stories you've read. I actually got the inspiration to read this one after really some sub-par sick Harry fics. Harry and Sev are gradually getting there, but it'll be quite some time yet before Harry truly thinks of Severus as his father enough to call him dad. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Consequence of Persuasion
| 31 May 2010
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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I haven't found any really good child fics in a while. I've read just about every one that is on this site. I like the way your story is going. Can't wait to see what the boys' punishments are. I like how you make your own spells and explain them even if they aren't your own. I got tired of authors writing about spells as if everyone knows Latin.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Well, thank you. I don't even know Latin, just struggling to cross reference and ask people for translation help. So, I feel it is very necessary to explain my spells that I come up with, especially ones that need the translation for plot purposes. Glad you find them useful. Thanks for reading and also for reviewing! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 36: A Confrontation
| 26 Apr 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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So random correction even though you already finished the story. Nymphadora and Severus already knew each other because in chapter 29 she calls him uncle sev. Also he taught her and says she is his niece-in-law. In this chapter you make them out to be complete strangers
Title: Chapter 43: Out of the Mouths of Babes and Fools
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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Hahaha I completely understand the World Cup fever. I am so glad Harry is winning. Sirius makes a very entertaining lawyer.Sev is still adorable. Can't wait til the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 15: New Orleans, part II
| 28 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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Lmao I knew Snape was going to walk in. I wonder what he is going to think about Harry going to a sex shop. Really love this story. Very original. Can't wait for your up date.
Title: Chapter 17: The One Thing He'll Always Regret, Part Two
| 26 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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So I actually hate the Voldemort from canon but like all of the really good fanfiction Voldemorts. Your VOldemort concept is original. I cannot wait to see how he is discovered. I am also liking how the relationship between Harry and snape developed. I can't wait for your update.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad you think it's an original approach. I've never seen it in another story, but there are so many fanfics floating around, one can never be sure.
Two stubborn wizards are stuck together trying to kill Voldemort for good. The Wizarding world thinks he's already dead, and Snape & Harry discover that Dumbledore didn't quite have all the answers. At least, not the right ones.
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Big Brother Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 5
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 22 Mar 2011 / 20 Feb 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - To Hide in Plain Sight
| 17 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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Really like the story so far. Just one spelling mistake. Kerb is spelled curb.
Author's Response: Thanks! And kerb is actually correct. It's the (British) English spelling of curb. :)
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 30 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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“Next person that tries to push me down the stairs is getting kicked in the stones.” I think that is the most brilliant threat I have ever read a young Harry Potter say. I like the idea for the story. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
Author's Response: Whoo!
Every year Harry Potter writes a letter to his second son, who is growing up surrounded by friends and family, new and old. Ignores a good chunk of the epilogue, happy and light.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Misc
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 21 May 2011 / 21 May 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 22 May 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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I think this is my favorite Albus Severus story. I like how you did the letters. most people make the letters seem like a joke opposed to something heartfelt. I can't wait to see your next work.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 22 May 2011
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Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed)
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I think this is my favorite Albus Severus story. I like how you did the letters. most people make the letters seem like a joke opposed to something heartfelt. I can't wait to see your next work.
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