Slytherin!
What was Potter doing, showing up at Hogwarts looking like Snape’s son? Snape is not Happy to discover that his son Ian has an older clone in Harry Potter.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel
Tags: Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by A98
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect
Chapters: 46 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2014 / 10 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother
Chapters: 46 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2014 / 10 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother
| Title: Chapter 46: Do you know why you are being punished? | 02 Jul 2022 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- This is such a great story! with a unique plot, I love your writing and the fact that you care to ask for your reviewers' opinions on how to go about things :)! I would love to so more chapters, any plan to continue?
a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 18 Sep 2018 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- I'm Glad You updated !, I hope harry use the psychiatrist for his benefit . he can try to drive James crazy by letting out his inner Slytherin ! after all we all know the head of Slytherin raised him well.
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 13 Aug 2018 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- Omg ,Please Do Continue ... this chapter was so intense and you can really see how sick and twisted James is ... reading this all i can think about is how can anyone do that to any child let alone HIS OWN ,his own flesh and blood ! I really don't understand what they want . I wish in the end Harry would do something crazy that would satisfy our needs for REVENGE but I still don't know what he can do ,and snape is just as helpless it's just so sad ! Update Soon!
Author's Response: A98, i can safely say that your prompt was what kicked me back to my feet and made me continue this story as it is going now. Harry will indeed get the revenge he deserves, and James WILL be put down when the time comes! all will be well in time. thank you for your great, uplifting review. The updates will be more frequent from this chapter on. have fun with the new chapter :)
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 13 Aug 2018 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- I wanted to comment on this chapter specifically because I read your note ,I know it was a while ago and you're probably over it but I have to say it ; Your Story Is Great , you are an amazing writer and you have to keep going ! let me tell you , when I started reading this story I had half the mind to leave it but couldn't ,because i generally hate good characters bashing and I've left many stories just because it had Ron's bashing on them . so seeing you bashing James and Lily two of the greatest characters in the books was a little annoying at first . but I did continue because your story was so intriguing , and I do hate them now so congratulations (I still love them in the books tho , God I feel twisted just like James.)it just says a lot about you as an author . it's not easy to make people continue reading your story when their initial thoughts wasn't that encouraging . So if anything YOU DESERVE AN AWARD ! 10/10 *the guy that commented should go to azkaban along with james.*
Author's Response: You're right ;) I'm way over that hateful comments. I was well aware of the errors in this story, and that was an eye-opening moment for me as a beginner, so I taught myself to keep improving it, and now that I'm better to a degree, I'm editing the earlier chapters in hopes to make them more readable, maybe even enjoyable for other readers. Ron is my favorite character and I'm not normally a fan of character bashing, which is exactly why I chose to write this way as a challenge. You cannot imagine how glad I am that my efforts haven't gone to waste. THANK YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT! It means the world to me.
Severus Snape was discovered as a spy mere days before the start of the school year. Thankfully, Albus had been working on a vague contingency plan for this possibility. It had been inspired by the question, “What would it take for Severus Snape to see that he was wrong about Harry Potter?”
The answer? Force Severus to go undercover as Alfonse “Eli” Hopkirk, a sixth year Gryffindor.
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaged!Snape, Disguised!Snape, Gryffindor!Snape, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
The answer? Force Severus to go undercover as Alfonse “Eli” Hopkirk, a sixth year Gryffindor.
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaged!Snape, Disguised!Snape, Gryffindor!Snape, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jan 2020 / 26 Sep 2019
Series: Forgiveness and Redemption - Challenges: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jan 2020 / 26 Sep 2019
Series: Forgiveness and Redemption - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 09 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- I like how this is going so far! very nice story. Can't wait to read more and find what Severus's back story is
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!
During the 19th century London, Harry Potter falls down the chimney of the apothecary of one Professor Severus Snape; bringing with him dire inconveniences.
But not every family is found in blood, and not every story follows the same path. For Harry, Snape and Draco, the truth has never been harsher.
A Severitus AU, one without magic. A/N: Slow edits.
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
But not every family is found in blood, and not every story follows the same path. For Harry, Snape and Draco, the truth has never been harsher.
A Severitus AU, one without magic. A/N: Slow edits.
Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Physical Punishment Spanking, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 May 2021 / 16 Jul 2020
Series: None - Challenges: Chimney Sweep
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 May 2021 / 16 Jul 2020
Series: None - Challenges: Chimney Sweep
| Title: Chapter 2: The Tarnished Chimney Flue | 24 Jul 2020 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- I really like this fiction so far! I have many questions that got answered in this chapter , like whether Snape knew it was Harry Potter or not, and some I'm waiting to be answered in the chapters to come, the biggest is why Harry isn't at Hogwarts , whether he is magical or not.
All in all, it's a very interesting story and the whole chimney boys thing reminds of an anime I used to love as a kid ^^
I can't wait for the next chapter, but good luck in your exams and Eid mubarak :))
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, and that you've found some answers. Well, we'll soon find out about it, won't we! ;) Thank you! I'm having it this morning and tomorrow, but I've already written a hefty amount yesterday, so hopefully there won't me any delays. Happy early Eid Mubarak as well!!
Four short stories of raising Harry.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Feb 2021 / 23 Feb 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Feb 2021 / 23 Feb 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: To Raise a Boy | 25 Feb 2021 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- I loved it
Voldemort went after the Longbottoms first. Neville is the Boy Who Lived, and Harry is the boy whose parents were tortured.
Alone and forgotten, Harry lives in the cupboard under the stairs. But some nights, some precious nights, he dreams of a dark man who takes him to see his mother, a sleeping princess in an enchanted castle.
Severus Snape never intended to do anything more than visit Lily, sit at her bedside and, perhaps, apologize once more, even if the healers say she cannot hear him. But then, something happens, Severus does not think things through, and now he has to hide a comatose Lily in his quarters at Hogwarts.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape
Alone and forgotten, Harry lives in the cupboard under the stairs. But some nights, some precious nights, he dreams of a dark man who takes him to see his mother, a sleeping princess in an enchanted castle.
Severus Snape never intended to do anything more than visit Lily, sit at her bedside and, perhaps, apologize once more, even if the healers say she cannot hear him. But then, something happens, Severus does not think things through, and now he has to hide a comatose Lily in his quarters at Hogwarts.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Aug 2021 / 03 Mar 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Aug 2021 / 03 Mar 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 03 Mar 2021 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- Great job so far! your writing has a nice flow and rhythm and I'm really excited to read more!
I have to admit, I didn't expect that to be the reason Severus would take her out of the hospital, I was appalled and creeped out, Wizards should really have something similar to security cameras in places like these.
Severus's thoughts and acts do indeed reflect the instincts of an actual human, he acted first -but not without the fast-thinking one would expect from a Slytherin of how to hide the crime scene - and then panicked when the repercussions of his actions finally dawned on him. He also asked and answered all of the questions I had as I was reading e.g. why didn't he just inform someone after he stunned the healer, but yes, whoever let something like this go till now won't stop because someone like Severus decided to intervene.
I fear that people would say he has the same intentions as the healer for taking her with him, and I hope that won't be the case if he gets caught.
But it's really a problem that needs to be dealt with, while he indeed did save Lily, and other patients that were this specific healer's victims, there are still other predators that'd continue the crime :(
Poor Severus, I really don't pity him for being in this situation.
But, Oh do I love reading about it XD
-Ananas
Author's Response: Thank you! I was inspired by an early version of Sleeping Beauty (where she wakes up after giving birth to twins, you can connect the dots ...) and a crime case I read about at the time, where,like you, I was appalled that there was nothing in place to prevent this sort of thing. I feel that Severus would be the kind of person to trust no one but himself in such a situation. Dumbledore, after all, already failed to protect Lily once. And yeah, if anyone ever finds out that Snape abducted Lily, it won't be pretty. (I haven't made up my mind as for whether that'll happen, but you can imagine what Rita Skeeter would write ...)
Summoned from the canon universe at his moment of death Snape lands in a world where he never delivered the prophecy. While he's adjusting to life as a husband, father to a quirky little girl, and step-father to a different Harry, wizards start disappearing forcing him to put his animosity aside and work with the most unlikely team to help bring down a villain worse than Voldemort.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Sibling Addition, Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Sibling Addition, Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jun 2023 / 15 Oct 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jun 2023 / 15 Oct 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Whole New World | 23 Apr 2022 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- I love this! this has a unique plot, one that I've never seen before, I like the idea of Severus being Harry's stepfather yet still having that animosity he has to him in cannon, can't wait to see where you go with this
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! This will a big a change from my main fics by having a canon Severus, but I do love the friction he brings with the AU Harry.
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Harry's Story | 31 Jul 2022 |
| Reviewer: A98 (Signed) |
- Of course, Dumbledore wouldn't be available when he is needed! I both feel sorry for Severus but am also frustrated with him because he can't just let go of his unreasonable hatred. I love Harry's character here, he's more confident in his abilities but still as brave and righteous as he is in canon. I can't wait to explore the relationship between this universe Severus and Lily, it's so interesting, and I can see getting kinda awkward for our Severus lol Do you have any updating schedule ? I know you work on your other story too but I hope you'd give just as much love to this one because I love it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There was a big delay in this chapter while I researched/decided how I wanted to handle magic with Harry's disability - where magic can/can't help him as well as a more solid timeline on the AU. Now that I have a better foundation in it, I'm hoping to find a schedule that can keep both stories updating together regularly. It's a bit ambitious, so I'll see how things fall. This has been a good break from my other story when I need to clear my head, and it's awesome to hear at least one other person enjoys reading it!