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| Hmm, what to say... love Harry, love Snape, put together they're better than hot fudge on icecream! Maybe I'll even try my hand at writing for HP one day, in the meantime I'll stick to reading and spoiling my Papillons :) [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 8: Handle With Care
| 07 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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Woo hoo, another update! Now I'm caught between wanting to swat Harry and Snape... men! I'm absolutely in love with your story though, and your characterizations and descriptions are terrific. Keep it up :)
Title: Chapter 5: To Have Loved And Lost
| 29 Aug 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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*very* promising start. I especially like how you've got Snape warming up to Harry rather slowly instead of rushing things as many authors do. keep it up!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm glad you think so, and I'm working at keeping it that way. I think it works better with the earlier timeframe, so neither of them are quite so set in their dislike just yet.
Title: Chapter 1: One More Such Victory
| 17 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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From the summary I was cringing thinking you were killing off Snape (a la end of HBP) as 'Harry gets revenge', but this reconciliation was tear-worthy :) Well done.
Harry and Severus struggle to come to terms with their painful history. A glimpse of an AU of HBP.
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 27 Sep 2007 / 27 Sep 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 28 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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Potion-itis? I love it :)
Good job on the interactions, and I especially like how you have Snape getting Harry to admit what he doesn't want to talk about. I always felt that in the books Harry was a little too closed-off, but you've done a great job of opening him up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I got the idea for 'Potion-itis' after re-reading OotP and how the students suffered from 'Umbridge-itis.' And I agree that Harry was a bit closed-off in the books, but then that's what fanfiction is for!
Title: Chapter 2: Speaking but not Listening
| 09 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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Wow, I don't think I've ever come across this particular premise before (and with my reading addiction, that's saying a lot!)
This is a great beginning, and I'm very much looking forward to reading more. I particularly like how you've written Snape as a more compassionate/responsible adult than the uncaring monster he's shown as in the books. Keep it up!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 19 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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Have you read Dave Pelzer's books? The plot seems a little familiar, but it's starting off well.
Author's Response: I have read those books and I dont think I will be following any ideas from that but that may change later. Thank you for the review!
Harry becomes Severus' charge during the Christmas break during 2nd year. Will Harry be able to survive his new overprotective guardian? This story may contain mild spanking but is not a main part of the story
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 26 Nov 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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Very interesting beginning... now poor Harry won't know what to think, what with being abducted and thrown around. I hope you continue, because this looks to be an extremely good read!
Also, if you're needing a beta, I can read it through for you. Especially now that I have a little free time in the evening, woo hoo!
Author's Response: Thank you! I could use a beta, I emailed you.
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Misunderstandings; and Chapter One: Misconceptions
| 10 Dec 2007
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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"spend weeks being spoiled rotten by his Muggle relatives?"
Am I hearing evil laughter? Ooh, I can't wait to read Snape's lovely wakeup call with the Dursleys! Bet he won't be able to spit those words out again afterwards :)
Title: Chapter 2: Dementors
| 22 May 2008
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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You have a very unique idea and I would love to see how it develops. Your beginning is intriguing and well thought out, and it would be a shame for this fic to die before we see what twists and turns it will take.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! And no WAY is this fic gonna die. And trust me, there will be twists. Oh boy, will there be twists! lol. :) Thanks so much for the review! :) -Elise
Title: Chapter 1: Disillusioned
| 02 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: akblake (Signed)
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*Very* intriguing. You have a promising start and I'm eager to find out what more you have in store for us!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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