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| waterleaves [Contact]
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| Member since: 06 Apr 2008
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| I'm a teen from the U.S. Although I have yet to write my own Snape and Harry piece, I love reading them! My favorites are guardian pieces. I've written a lot of Lily pieces over at fanfiction.net under the name spinningleaves, and I've started to post my own original work at fictionpress.com under the penname waterleaves. Feel free to check them out! [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 4: Culpable
| 16 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Cliffhanger! I loveee this story! I love the new look at Slytherin House and Draco and Severus- and ahh just everything! My favorite part is probably the way that nothing seems too out of character either! Great work! I'll be following this story for sure!
"Obliviate" the whispered spell drifted through the air stripping the wizard of his promise to Lily Potter. It was the only way he could look Severus in the eye, it was the only way he could pretend he had not done Harry Potter a great injustice. The twinkle returned to his blue eyes.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 4
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Completed: No
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Updated: 05 Jul 2008 / 01 Jun 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Fickle Fates
| 12 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Oh Dumbledore. Such far reaching mistakes... nice piece- it'll be interesting to see how Snape factors in- family of some sort I'm assuming!
Title: Chapter 8: Homecoming
| 23 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Haha I normally don't review until I've read something through but this is absolutely hysterical! I loveee the little add on not to be caught drinking, and the part about telling Harry he can "skulk around" haha is hysterical! I lovee your story!
Title: Chapter 11: Weltschmerz
| 23 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Wonderful story! Nice little Hedwig bit there! I love seeing Snape do all these little fatherly things like checking whether the books are appropriate and being angry that Harry balances on a wobbly chair. Great stuff- it adds more believability to his character that he clearly takes the idea of being a guardian so seriously!
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Orphan
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 0
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Jan 1970 / 01 Jan 1970
Series: The Darkness Within
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: No Twinkling Matter
| 16 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Oh boy here we go! I can't wait for a relationship between the two boys to develop! And Dumbledore what on earth are you playing at?! Nice story- keep going!
Title: Chapter 5: "I have a bed here" III
| 28 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Haha consider this to be pestering! I'm interested to see where the relationship goes from here, and if Harry's relationship with his peers improves at all!
Title: Chapter 11: The Potions Essay
| 25 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Oh my gosh I loveee it! Great story! I'm so interested to see how their relationship will change now. Great story!
Author's Response: That's great to hear, thank you! The next few days should be interesting...
Title: Chapter 1: Between
| 28 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Aww such a sad look at the way things could've been. Interesting to parallel Harry's experience with Snape's!
Author's Response: I must say, we should all be glad I don't own Harry Potter.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Only Levi to Keep Me Company
| 21 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Of course Dumbledore knows about the letter! You've certainly moved on to more mature concerns with this story- I love the way everyone is growing up. I'll be interested to see how Severus handles his mother's health issues and how the interaction between Harry and Ginny progresses. Excellent stuff!
Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later
| 30 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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OH MY GOSH! This story was utterly amazing! I loveee your epilogue and the way the little tidbits were all slowly revealed! I really loved the way you had them pick Hufflepuff from the very beginning. Great way to show us from the get-go what kind of a trio this was gunna be! And Hermione researching magical theory like the genius she is?
I lovedd your language imagery. Like when Hermione and the old scholar were debating and you made the comparison to winter and spring? Tom Riddle lounging in a nice armchair in the forest! Excellent! Well done all around!
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