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Rainbow Of Grey by Angels Broken Shadow starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
There is no such thing as black or white, only a rainbow of grey. Expansion of 'Fairytale'.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2011 / 22 Nov 2008
Series: The Little Child To Lead Them - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Freak 04 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    A promising start indeed. You have my attention, well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks!

Resolution by wellyuthink starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
The time has come to go back to Hogwarts, but is Harry ready? Struggling to deal with the loss of Shadow, the alarming discovery of his paternity and the problems created by a newly risen Voldemort, the coming term proves to be the most difficult one that Harry has ever faced. Sequel to 'Know Thyself'

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Nov 2012 / 31 Jan 2009
Series: Evolution - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Confrontations 17 Feb 2009
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Yet again another brilliant story.
    I liked how Snape is still snarky.
    Good job

    Author's Response: Thank you - writing snarky Snape is a bit like my drug :) Just can't get enough of it!

Past Featured Story Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat by RhiannanT starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 922]
Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...

NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Damn that Hat! 15 Mar 2009
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Excellent. I love the fics where Harry is confident.
    A very good start, well done.

Return to Prince Manor by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 710]
A new year means new perils and friendships for Harry, as he faces the Triwizard Tournament, a vengeful Dark Lord's return, and must try and master the secrets of Prince Manor. Can his family and friends help him succeed? Sequel to Heir to Prince Manor!

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Vampires
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 79 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Dec 2011 / 20 May 2009
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Ambushed! 26 Jul 2010
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Hi.
    Just re-reading both stories and wanted to say that they are brill.

    Also, and I hope you are not offended by this, in this chapter you have Harry punching Percy Weasley in the gryff common room....and then in chapter 13 you have crouch refering to Percy as his assistant.
    Maybe you already caught that...but it confused me so i thought i would mention it.

    jay

3 Slytherin Marauders by severusphoenix starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 362]
Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 65: Draco's Oscar Winning Performance 04 Feb 2010
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    lol, you are brilliant.
    I'm totally hooked on this story now.
    I love how you are getting Lucius and Pretunia together.....brilliant.

    I think you have depected Tom really well and I like how he is big brother to Harry, Draco and Dudly.

    I like Hugo to, wonder if Harry is going to call him Uncle Hugo lol.

    Its nice to see Neville with a dark side too.

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. I've had fun writing it.

Life Goes On by PadyandMoony starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Sequel to “The name is Potter Black!” where Sirius adopted Harry as a toddler and raised him at Hogwarts. This is what happened after the events of the end of Harry’s fourth year. Must read “The name is Potter Black!” first.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2009 / 22 Aug 2009
Series: The name is Potter Black! - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue- Life Goes on 25 Aug 2009
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Thank you so much.
    I really enjoyed reading this series. It took me two days and i'm in a bit of trouble for staying up all last night to read it but it was worth it.
    I liked the way you dedicated it to your friend, very nice.
    Congrats on a great series.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you had fun! I've done that a few times, but they are always worth it.


Brothers of Bond by watercrystals starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 173]
On the night of October 31st, when Voldemort showed up to kill Harry, he found that two of his Death Eaters were already there; traitors. That night left two boys orphaned and seeing no other option, Dumbledore placed both boys on the Dursley's doorstep. Draco and Harry grow up bonding as brothers for they're the only other person they've got to rely on. Come their year at Hogwarts, they're both sorted into Gryffindor. But Severus Snape watches them...will he be able to take them in when they need him; his godson and a boy that should have been his son?

Takes Place: 1st Year, 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Oct 2010 / 03 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: Unjustified Departures 01 Feb 2010
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    I'm really enjoying this story.
    I think this is the first one I have read, from the brothers genre that I actually like.
    Well done with Snape, he's very believable.

    Author's Response:

    jflame,

    Glad to hear it. Yeah? Well I'm thrilled and honored by your comments! Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)


Serendipity by Winger-Hawk starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 352]
(UPDATED: APR 02 2011) Snape wakes up from a coma to a new world in which Voldemort is dead and gone, defeated by Harry Potter. Deciding he has nothing more to live for, he tries to end his life, but things don't quite work out the way he planned. Harry gets pulled in by Dumbledore to assist with Snape's...little dilemma.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Aug 2010 / 11 Sep 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 39: All I (Really) Want for Christmas... 22 Mar 2010
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Whos been watching Love Actually then?

    Loving this story. Sev and Pebby are soooooo cute.
    Well done.

When the Boat Comes In by Morgana starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 618]
Darkness swallowed Severus's childhood and is threatening to engulf Harry's. Will the man recognize himself in the boy before history repeats itself? [Generally short chapters due to (almost) daily updates]

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Profanity
Chapters: 60 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 May 2010 / 07 Mar 2010
Series: Ship to Shore - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 47: Painful Truths 22 Apr 2010
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Awww. I like how Harry is so sweet in this fic.
    I wonder though, did you intentionally have Harry act young in your mind when you wrote this?
    I know that children who have been denied a parental figure sometimes regress a little. Sort of making up for what they missed.

    Congrats on a great story, looking forward to reading more.
    regards jay.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review ^^ As you've suggested, Harry does regress into the behaviour of a younger child, especially under highly stressful circumstances. In the last few chapters, this is especially pronounced as Harry has just lost Voldemort's soul shard; that nasty little voice is no longer disparaging him and, therefore, Harry is slightly off-balance and, as he's considerably more confident in his emotions, he's rather needy and does not scruple to conceal it. Also, Harry has Draco as a role model and Draco acts rather younger than his years around his parents, especially his doating Dad.

    However, Harry often acts with a maturity which is far greater than his years, (i.e. his sentiments towards Ron when 'Scabbers' died), so he's a mixture, like most abused children.   


Past Featured Story The Definition of Home by oliversnape starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 244]
Harry runs into Snape while trying to find the definition of home, and finds himself drawn into Snape's summer Order task by the headmaster, looking for a location outside of London. Along the way, he and Snape learn a few new definitions themselves.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 May 2010 / 08 Apr 2010
Series: Redefining Life - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 04 May 2010
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Shudder!! Bees.....horrid little stingy things!!
    Loving this story.


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