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| Member since: 28 Feb 2012
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Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor
| 05 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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A beautifully done story. The child abuse, though horrid was well done. As a reader I felt the sorrow for the child. A delightful solution, an apprentice. The party was a hoot.
Title: Chapter 29: A Deadly Game
| 19 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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The feelings of Severus and Remus are so well done. It will be interesting to see how Remus does handle the three boys. Still, so scary. You did a wonderful job with Severus and his feeling again of impending loss.
Title: Chapter 30: Outwitted by the Witless
| 18 Oct 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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That was so scary. Such a close call for Harry. You are doing an amazing job.
Title: Chapter 33: Sirius Talk
| 05 Jun 2014
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Reflections and Apologizes
| 29 Oct 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Lovely. It takes a great deal of wisdom and maturity to apologize like that. Great ending.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 12: More Trouble?
| 08 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Aninteretsting twist that is making such a difference. Good job with the characters.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 09 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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One of the cut scenes in film 6 showed Snape waiting. The look on his face shored the pain that was going to come; thedeath of Albus. In the film you only see his back and not his face. I can not figure out why the scene was cut.
You story did such s good job of showing bravery and compassion of the man. Also lessening the whole truth.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have a small sequel posted called The Substitute here and a third one called Birthday Treat over at ff.net if you'd like to read more in this AU.
After arriving back at school a week early, Harry's new school year is set to be filled with mystery and adventure. Who is the Whispering Man and what does his presence at Hogwarts mean? Is the Wizarding World safe now that He Who Must Not Be Named is returning to power? Join the adventure as Harry, Ron and Hermione navigate their Fourth Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 30 Jul 2014 / 29 Jul 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man
| 30 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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This is such an amazing story. I really enjoy reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you've really made me smile! Super glad you like it, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 06 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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You did do a good job with Dumbledore, and he wasn't physically there. It always bothered me in the originals how he overlooked all the abuse.
Author's Response: Totally agree. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 1: Things Corrected: Snape Style
| 06 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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That is so good. You really caught the anger. A troublesome brat, but his troublesome brat.
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